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PostSubject: My best match so far(feedback please)   Thu Jan 21, 2010 1:54 am

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-F1eNJguU80&feature=player_embedded
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PostSubject: Re: My best match so far(feedback please)   Fri Jan 22, 2010 12:41 am

Take this criticism or fuck you. Im only pointing out what you need to improve on, take it or suck my dick.

Keep your head up in a tie up.
Make contact with your elbow.
Work on your strikes, period..
Shoulder block needs more emotion. It looks like you dont even see the guy, you just run through him. Make it look like you want to hit him.
Dont just run, stop, turn around, and run back, looks so bad. Roll out of a whip, or dont whip at all.
Terrible kick? thing.
Lock up again?
Work on your strikes.
Dont whip without ropes!
Terrible hiptoss. Lift him up more.
STOP RUNNING THE INVISIBLE ROPES.
More terrible hiptoss/reversal things.
DID HE REALLY JUST DO A LOU THESZ PRESS?
Cute dance....no
Rolling out of his missed divespot? bad.
Three weak kicks. and they're down the spine. Go across the shoulders.
Pretty bad leg drop. Both legs should be equal, heels and ass hit at the same time. I guess.
Work on your back bumps.
LOL at him diving over the bench, barley touching you and you rolling. that roll made me actually laugh out loud.
Im done. I dont want to watch the rest of the video. but yeah you got the majority.

you're welcome.
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PostSubject: Re: My best match so far(feedback please)   Fri Jan 22, 2010 1:16 am

wow... i couldnt tell what about 50-60 percent of the moves were SUPPOSED to be.

Way to make a curbstomp - at one point the most DEVASTATING move in all of wrestling, movies, LIFE - look like a complete panzy ass move. It literally looked horrendous. Doing 3 that looked so unimpressive right in a row completely killed the move, and any chances that i would finish watching the match. Seriously, i used to be scared to take curbstomps when i first heard of them, and saw American History X. I was like "Nigs get fucked up with shit like that!" - but you managed to make it looked like i could Curbstomp a butterfly without even bending its wing.

Honestly... you need to learn how to do everything. Back bumps, front bumps, flip bumps, chaining, hip tosses - they looked horrible, Learn to whip without ropes (pull backs), how to strike, where to strike (and where NOT to - i.e. THE SPINE), pretty much EVERYTHING. Watch wrestling footage. Practice it, as I'm sure you have 293048203948029384 excuses not to go and train, which is fine, everyone does at one point or another. But i would say either find some more established ppl to teach you by going to other shows and watching/learning, but that should not be your "Best" anything. I mean it hardly looked like you guys were trying more than half the time.
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