Well I finally have a match I'm happy with enough to put up on here for some feedback. Let me know what you guys think and any feedback is appreciated. Try not to be too hard on me though, it's only my 3rd match haha.

trying to qatch but youtube i running very slow, if theres any way for a download link i can leave some feedy

luv ya

-A little tighter lock up
-Liked the t.o.s into the hammerlock
-Liked the playing to speed advantage with the head slaps those little things add realism to the match
-Step up ddt was diff lol
-Try and get a little more flow on those arm drags...the one from the crossbody is the one im talking about
-Elbow drop <3
-hehe he can dance
-You should of gotten up quicker from the elbow being how your supposed to be the big stong man it shouldnt of put you down for that long
-The axe handle the knee combo was good
-im loving seeing a old school bear hug..holy fuck into a belly to belly
-I liked how you held the hold out of the neckbreaker
-The X factor reversal was fun
-Ending confused me a little but shit happens
Overall id say this was very good being how its only like what your 3rd or 4th match i think, you making the attempt to be inovative which is lacked by alot of wrestlers when they first start out. Cant wait to see more media from you

Ahhh ok now I understand what happened with the ending haha

I've been in this kinda "Instead of sleeping and waking up n time for work in the morning, I'm going to stay up all night watching videos and leaving really loong feedback so that way I don't wake up in the morning and end up late to work" mood lately... so here's another long feedback reply from me:

-Lock up should be tighter and more intense, but still looked pretty good... and the throw I feel like would look better as a straight back bump...

-TOS hammerlock spot worked very well... I just kinda wish there was more vocal work going on... That's something we had drilled into our heads in training... Be LOUD. Vocally. Talk a LOT. There's never too much talking... taunting your opponent, being a douchey heel, getting the crowd behind you... whatever. Do not, however, be like me and just well COME ON a lot... THAT gets fuckin' annoying...laff. watch any of my matches... all I ever yell is COME ON... always. Mix it up. Yell shit. Move names, insults, one liners... whatever,....

-AGH! Don't do that! Right sided headlock with his back to you? Worst. Headlock are to the left and your lower bodies should always be facing each other...

-Unrelatedly, now that the TOS spot has passed, there's a lot more vocal work... haha. good.

-AGH RIGHT SIDED ARM WRENCH!!! NOOOO!!! Always left. If someone gets you in a right sided move, cut them off immediately... Other people doing things wrong TO you makes you look equally as bad...

-shining DDT? Neat... I may try to steal some variation of that...

-Cross body arm drag could've been cleaner...

-Dancing around like that is kinda heelish... just sayin...

-When you throw a line or something that's going to be ducked, THROW IT... Make it look like you were REALLY trying to take his head off with it... If he doesn't duck, that's his fault not yours... Make everything look like it's completely legit...

-bear hug belly to belly was boss... do that every single match...

-McDude needs to not put his arms back on powerbombs... good way to break something...

-Neckbreaker hold is awesome... another move that you should use kinda as a signature... More impact on the neckbreaker would've been good though...

-When you go for a powerbomb and go to do the lift, kinda do this up, down, up motion so that the other guy knws when he's going. He should be pushing off of your knees to help get up, so when you're going you should kinda roll up to your toes kinda, then bend your knees, then go up... It's something that kinda takes practice, but will look way better... unless you just wanna do straight dead lift moves...

-KICK OUT... When you kick out make it believable and make it BIG... make sure every single person there knows that you KICKED THE FUCK OUT... Haha. trust me dude, this will make a huge difference in the flow of matches...

-After a big move like that double knees, kick out almost on 3... those are those moves should be false finishes and make the crowd think it's over but OH! WHAT? Last second kick out kinda deal...

-Ya know what, i said all that before noticing you tossed him onto your knees... and I decided that was fuckin' awesome. haha.

-Swiss Death Lariat? Neat idea... wish it had worked out better... keep trying that move... i think that could potentially be a finisher move...

-Why did he just do push ups? dumb.

-Meh... not a big fan of the finish... it was good, and worked out well... I just kinda like a big climax... idk...


Good match, all things considered. Especially for your 3rd or 4th match... I definitely think that if you keep at it and keep trying to learn and improve, you'll be a top dog in the yard world someday. legit. Try to get out and travel to shows as much as you can. Ask people to watch your matches live, and critique them for you. Also, watch yourself a lot and see what YOU don't like about you... You are your own harshest critic, so you'll notice things most people won't... that's a good thing. I watch myself an unhealthy amount of time, and I definitely learn a lot from doing it... If I see something I don't like, even a little bit, I know that I need to change it. it may look good to someone else, but I know it can be better... Other people won't find those things. talk to people, get advice, train with anybody you can, do camps at local indy feds... anything you can to get better, and you'll be doing really well for yourself in no time.

Thanks for the feedback d00d. Much appreciated.

It's always cool to hear other people are fans of the random crap I come up with like the straight jacket neckbreaker. I mean, I like all that shit but having other people say that let's me know that shit is working.

I'll make sure to address some of the issues you brought up though, even though it seems most are with my opponent haha.

Anyone else got anything for me? Help out a rookie looking to improve d00ds.

the chop to spinal tap to double knees were cool,dont like endings like that, it was ok, i know its only your 3rd match but you'll get better

ah nice, storylines are pretty cool