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Da Shoota Jerichoholic

Number of posts: 5449 Age: 21 Location: Chicago GBYWN Rep: 1662 Registration date: 2008-04-06
 | Subject: ghj Mon Sep 21, 2009 7:52 pm | |
| kkkggggg _____________________ "I'm proud of my life and the things that I have done, proud of myself and the loner I've become. You're free to whine. It will not get you far. I do just fine, my car and my guitar."
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Devin Sez Hai! It's Time To Retire


Number of posts: 8610 Age: 20 Location: Indiana Federation(s): REVIVAL AKA: Devin Bliss GBYWN Rep: 3662 Registration date: 2009-01-31
 | Subject: Re: ghj Mon Sep 21, 2009 7:56 pm | |
| HOLY EFF! Is this finally uploaded? >>; |
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BOOM! Taylor Gang


Number of posts: 2216 Age: 18 Location: Anderson, IN Federation(s): ICW(DEAD), REVIVAL, CCW AKA: [!C0N] GBYWN Rep: 520 Registration date: 2008-08-02
 | Subject: Re: ghj Mon Sep 21, 2009 9:07 pm | |
| I love you Matt.  |
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Da Shoota Jerichoholic

Number of posts: 5449 Age: 21 Location: Chicago GBYWN Rep: 1662 Registration date: 2008-04-06
 | Subject: Re: ghj Mon Sep 21, 2009 9:46 pm | |
| <3 _____________________ "I'm proud of my life and the things that I have done, proud of myself and the loner I've become. You're free to whine. It will not get you far. I do just fine, my car and my guitar."
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FatMac BOOTS to ASSES

Number of posts: 100 Age: 19 Location: Oakdale,Ca GBYWN Rep: 20 Registration date: 2009-08-17
 | Subject: Re: ghj Mon Sep 21, 2009 10:35 pm | |
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Sir RegalBoogy Taylor Gang


Number of posts: 2891 Age: 21 Location: Burlington, IA Federation(s): DWA, NSFW AKA: RK GBYWN Rep: 1332 Registration date: 2009-08-25
 | Subject: Re: ghj Tue Sep 22, 2009 2:44 am | |
| Long annoying painful feedback:
-Bring his hand into your chest on the arm wrench. He should be able to tickle your chin.
-Also, he shouldn't turn his back to you and he should bend his arm. Your arm being straight is what will fuckin' hurt if this move was being done shoot... Trust me.
-There's a lot of unnecessary steps being taken here... I'm not sure whos fault that is really, but keep it still. Also try to keep the amount of step it takes to do each move down. Three steps is more than enough for any move.
-Uhm... trip? Huh? What happened?
-Make your strikes bigger. They look and sound good, but they are kinda tight and small. Make them almost feel ridiculous. In theory, you need to make the person on the farthest side of the yard see what you're doing.
-Hook the leg. Always. Unless it's like the very end of the match and you are completely spent.
-Forearm battle looked REALLY good on both parts
-Chongo should've gone for a pin after that brainbuster... why would you slam a guy down just to pick him up again?
-The hank should've been hooked the opposite way around Chongo's head... in case you aren't familiar with the term, Hank is a snapmare out of an arm wrench. But yeah, it's not the same as a regular snapmare, you're really almost just pushing their head down and forward...
-You take such gross DDTs...
-When you kick out.... KICK THE FUCK OUT. Haha. Make it VERY noticable that you kicked out. Nothing is worse than seeing a huge move, then a 2 count where the guy just kinda tosses his arm up... Kick your legs, THROW your shoulder.... make it BIG. Get your whole body behind it...
-Oh fuck! Chongo with the headscissor... really kinda a transitional move that doesn't make much sense this late in the match, but still very impressive... I marked.
-LAFF at the deadlift bomb spot. Good stomp...
-You just took a german... then hit two kinda weak forearms and had the power to german him? The logic there is impeccable... haha. but it's whatever. This is backyard afterall... haha.
-Knicks..... hit a flip gym dude. haha.
-Chongo needed a couple more shots in before that piledriver.. I almost missed him hitting you at all...
-I always love me a Lightning Spiral
-I was kinda expecting more out of the finish, but it worked pretty well I think.
Altogether, a good solid match. I think the psychology could definitely use some work and you need to make sure that even though you're blown up, every strike and every move looks like you fuckin' MEAN IT. Forearms aren't just transitional bull shit, they're offensive moves. Every one of them should make an impact. One good forearm looks WAY better than 5 alright looking ones... Still, though, solid match. Someday Knicks vs. whatever my new yard name is going to be will def have to happen. |
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Da Shoota Jerichoholic

Number of posts: 5449 Age: 21 Location: Chicago GBYWN Rep: 1662 Registration date: 2008-04-06
 | Subject: Re: ghj Tue Sep 22, 2009 8:23 am | |
| thanks so much for the feedy, haha and on a side note, i have fixed the arm wrenches since then =] _____________________ "I'm proud of my life and the things that I have done, proud of myself and the loner I've become. You're free to whine. It will not get you far. I do just fine, my car and my guitar."
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BOOM! Taylor Gang


Number of posts: 2216 Age: 18 Location: Anderson, IN Federation(s): ICW(DEAD), REVIVAL, CCW AKA: [!C0N] GBYWN Rep: 520 Registration date: 2008-08-02
 | Subject: Re: ghj Tue Sep 22, 2009 7:52 pm | |
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BOOM! Taylor Gang


Number of posts: 2216 Age: 18 Location: Anderson, IN Federation(s): ICW(DEAD), REVIVAL, CCW AKA: [!C0N] GBYWN Rep: 520 Registration date: 2008-08-02
 | Subject: Re: ghj Wed Sep 23, 2009 8:41 pm | |
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Adrian Blaqueheart FREE NICK GAGE.


Number of posts: 4405 Age: 19 Location: Colorado Springs, CO Federation(s): ABW (defunct), MXW AKA: Nicholas GBYWN Rep: 1553 Registration date: 2008-12-01
 | Subject: Re: ghj Wed Sep 23, 2009 10:23 pm | |
| I can now finally say I have seen a Matt Knicks match. My only comment is this: Nice bulge  But seriously, good match. |
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XCal ESPN Broadcaster


Number of posts: 1411 Age: 20 Location: Greenfield, IN Federation(s): AEW (INDY), CCW (BY),UBW (BY) GBYWN Rep: 276 Registration date: 2008-04-06
 | Subject: Re: ghj Thu Sep 24, 2009 4:51 pm | |
| Good match guys keep it up |
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Johnny Shock Find the Weight Room


Number of posts: 335 Age: 16 Location: Toms River, NJ Federation(s): OCWA AKA: The electrifying. GBYWN Rep: 915 Registration date: 2009-06-06
 | Subject: Re: ghj Thu Sep 24, 2009 5:32 pm | |
| Lol fail powerbomb made me giggle. Some strikes were really weak. Like some of Chongos chops and that one kick where he tapped you and you super sold. Lightning spiral was good. The burning hammer-ish finish, Chongo should have taken it better. Lol facebumped a rollup The second lockup was meh. Overall, I likes it lots. Good job |
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BOOM! Taylor Gang


Number of posts: 2216 Age: 18 Location: Anderson, IN Federation(s): ICW(DEAD), REVIVAL, CCW AKA: [!C0N] GBYWN Rep: 520 Registration date: 2008-08-02
 | Subject: Re: ghj Thu Sep 24, 2009 9:30 pm | |
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