Number of posts: 558 Age: 15 Location: Halden, Norway Federation(s): None i guess... AKA: Flame GBYWN Rep: 435 Registration date: 2009-02-07
Subject: Re: TCW 9/17/09 Sun Sep 20, 2009 8:32 am
Real feedback
- First match all moves were sloppy - The little kid cant punch at all - The second match actually were okay to watch - At the figure four, dont start selling before youve gotten the move locked in - I dont even know what ahppened in the third match, hitting someone with a soft playduck??? WTF? This match wasent hardcore or anything at all, possibly the worst match of TCW ive seen until now, it sucked!! - Overall 2/5
Number of posts: 4405 Age: 19 Location: Colorado Springs, CO Federation(s): ABW (defunct), MXW AKA: Nicholas GBYWN Rep: 1553 Registration date: 2008-12-01
Subject: Re: TCW 9/17/09 Sun Sep 20, 2009 1:45 pm
First match:
- I liked how there were actually a few moves, even if a lot of them were sloppy. They definitely need to work on bumping, though it can take time to get accustomed to the ground. Their lock ups are bad, too. Remember, it's left hand on the back of the neck/head while the right hand/forearm is on the inside of your opponent's left elbow. I'm not sure which is right between the hand and forearm, I've seen people do both; I think they're each advantageous for different situations, like when you use the hand it seems to be easier to spin someone out of the lock up and into a waist lock.
- Make sure your guys are remembering the rule of left.
Second match:
- If the super kick was used for the finish of the first match, why would it not even knock down the grey guy in the beginning of the second?
- More moves in this match, which is good. The cleanest move was the People's Elbow, though I really dislike using such gimmick-based moves of other wrestlers. There seemed to be quite a few similar moves, though I could be imagining things. An STO is a bad move for a finisher.
Third...ummm?:
- I have no idea what's going on. Is this a random brawl, a ladder match, what? Don't try to do a match like this for a long time. What kind of matches do you see new WWE wrestlers working? Simple, ten-minutes-or-less matches, where they work on the basics of wrestling and start revealing their move-sets and styles. You need to do matches like that just to slowly develop yourselves. Matches like this take way more experience to work well.
An okay show. You're getting better.
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Subject: Re: TCW 9/17/09 Sun Sep 20, 2009 1:49 pm
Thank you sir. Watch this match. I edited and uploaded it today. Taped yesterday.