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PostSubject: Shawn Selby vs. Marvel for the NWF Championship *Serious reviews wanted please*   Thu Sep 17, 2009 2:03 pm

Before you watch this... I would like to request some serious critques only if possible. I want to know what I did right and what I did wrong because I want to work on my weaknesses before I go to ICW again. I don't want a sentence that says "You suck" or something like that because I already know that lol. I'm also experimenting so I can have a solid moveset too.

Brodie and others, I'm sorry for being a jerk last time I posted media. I'm just bad at learning and understanding stuff so if you see this I'm sorry I'll try harder next time



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PostSubject: Re: Shawn Selby vs. Marvel for the NWF Championship *Serious reviews wanted please*   Thu Sep 17, 2009 8:07 pm

hot chicks??
im deff coming to DUE if ya'll ever have another show
promise me ill get to meet them
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PostSubject: Re: Shawn Selby vs. Marvel for the NWF Championship *Serious reviews wanted please*   Thu Sep 17, 2009 8:10 pm

haha. Well, me and the girls are in NWF now so you'll be seeing more of them in the new fed I wrestle in soon. I'm gonna be the one training them though to wrestle though which makes me feel bad because I'm a shitty trainer haha
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PostSubject: Re: Shawn Selby vs. Marvel for the NWF Championship *Serious reviews wanted please*   Thu Sep 17, 2009 8:12 pm

remember cheap feel them up on slap chops and do alot tombstones(;
lol
what title belt is that black and red one i want it
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PostSubject: Re: Shawn Selby vs. Marvel for the NWF Championship *Serious reviews wanted please*   Thu Sep 17, 2009 8:25 pm

i stopped watching once i heard u using Legacy's theme

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PostSubject: Re: Shawn Selby vs. Marvel for the NWF Championship *Serious reviews wanted please*   Thu Sep 17, 2009 10:19 pm

so much for serious reviews...

Tommy thats the underground elite title. I might be selling it to Big Will now that DUE shut down
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PostSubject: Re: Shawn Selby vs. Marvel for the NWF Championship *Serious reviews wanted please*   Thu Sep 17, 2009 10:34 pm

i mean where did you get it?
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PostSubject: Re: Shawn Selby vs. Marvel for the NWF Championship *Serious reviews wanted please*   Thu Sep 17, 2009 11:18 pm

Serious review:

Randa makes me laugh, and I did the same thing he did.
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PostSubject: Re: Shawn Selby vs. Marvel for the NWF Championship *Serious reviews wanted please*   Fri Sep 18, 2009 12:00 am

Tommy Rainbow you suck.

ShawnWoW! I'll review this later for realz I'm a little eh right now.
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PostSubject: Re: Shawn Selby vs. Marvel for the NWF Championship *Serious reviews wanted please*   Fri Sep 18, 2009 1:03 am

-Didn't like the skipping of chaining right into moves
-Wrong sided suplex but ppl dont really care bout that much
-Sells couldve been better on the forearms cuz usually wouldnt get right back up like nothing happened
-Like the submission but make there a reason to let go instead of just stopping it
-Pretty nice dropkick
-Fall quicker with the DDT's. going slow just makes them look somewhat sloppy
-Good back body drop. Too commonly see guys put their hands out before they land
-Weird DDT back into the ring
-Ladder spot was cool. Not sure if he just jumped off or it was an actual splash but looked nice
-Too many DDT's for one match
-Senton looked little weird
-Facebuster was good
-Superplex off the tramp was nice but try not to make it so predictable with spots like that
-The kick when Marvel was on the tramp looked really weird. Dunno what happened but just didnt look right
-Samoan toss off the tramp was good

Overall was a pretty good match just work on more chaining and executing moves a little better. Hopefully I helped
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PostSubject: Re: Shawn Selby vs. Marvel for the NWF Championship *Serious reviews wanted please*   Fri Sep 18, 2009 8:26 am

Thank you Cody. That really was helpful Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Shawn Selby vs. Marvel for the NWF Championship *Serious reviews wanted please*   Fri Sep 18, 2009 8:27 am

Tommy Rainbow wrote:
i mean where did you get it?


I got it on some MMA site called Title of something I don't remember for sure though
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PostSubject: Re: Shawn Selby vs. Marvel for the NWF Championship *Serious reviews wanted please*   Fri Sep 18, 2009 9:11 am

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Thank you Cody. That really was helpful


No problem man. Still improving myself but always happy to help others out
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PostSubject: Re: Shawn Selby vs. Marvel for the NWF Championship *Serious reviews wanted please*   Fri Sep 18, 2009 11:14 am

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PostSubject: Re: Shawn Selby vs. Marvel for the NWF Championship *Serious reviews wanted please*   Fri Sep 18, 2009 1:04 pm

SO MANY SUPLEXES AND DDTS. That's what the whole match was. Get a good gimmick too, don't copy off WWE. I hope those chicks were hot.

Joe Randa, you're funny, let's be friends


Some key things:

Tie up, left foot forward
Headlocks, left side, bring your left leg back
Just remember most of the basic stuff is done on the left.
Heat changes were so quick
Match didn't make much sense

You need work dawg
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PostSubject: Re: Shawn Selby vs. Marvel for the NWF Championship *Serious reviews wanted please*   Fri Sep 18, 2009 2:05 pm

Brodie. wrote:
SO MANY SUPLEXES AND DDTS. That's what the whole match was. Get a good gimmick too, don't copy off WWE. I hope those chicks were hot.

Joe Randa, you're funny, let's be friends


Some key things:

Tie up, left foot forward
Headlocks, left side, bring your left leg back
Just remember most of the basic stuff is done on the left.
Heat changes were so quick
Match didn't make much sense

You need work dawg


Yeah, I know. I need a lot of help especially gimmick wise. I didn't have much time to think something up considering I just ditched Shawn Jovi completely. For most basic stuff being on the left does that mean using the left side of my body. I'm a lot better than when I first joined this site. I need a solid move set yet because I agree that suplexes and DDT's were over used. Thanks for the help sir, I'll work on it.

I wish I could wrestle more often so I can get this stuff down right before I go to ICW again because I'm probably only gonna get one more show in before that in NWF Sad
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PostSubject: Re: Shawn Selby vs. Marvel for the NWF Championship *Serious reviews wanted please*   Fri Sep 18, 2009 2:07 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Shawn Selby vs. Marvel for the NWF Championship *Serious reviews wanted please*   Fri Sep 18, 2009 2:13 pm

awwww... how cute... lol
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PostSubject: Re: Shawn Selby vs. Marvel for the NWF Championship *Serious reviews wanted please*   Fri Sep 18, 2009 2:25 pm

Joe Randa wrote:
Brodie. wrote:


Joe Randa, you're funny, let's be friends




<3

And we're already friends on myspace and facebook!
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PostSubject: Re: Shawn Selby vs. Marvel for the NWF Championship *Serious reviews wanted please*   Fri Sep 18, 2009 2:27 pm

Oh, and Shawn, just watch some wrestling videos, but watch for details more than anything
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