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PostSubject: ICW: Why Aren't We In St. Louis: Donnie Holidae vs. The Pen Name   Fri Sep 04, 2009 8:23 pm

Ending is weird. Chongo interfered. You can't see it.
It's still processing.
Fun.
Criticism is always welcome. Feedy! :]



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PostSubject: Re: ICW: Why Aren't We In St. Louis: Donnie Holidae vs. The Pen Name   Fri Sep 04, 2009 9:11 pm

Lol random headspikes...


Someone help Will up D:
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PostSubject: Re: ICW: Why Aren't We In St. Louis: Donnie Holidae vs. The Pen Name   Fri Sep 04, 2009 10:57 pm

If only.
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PostSubject: Re: ICW: Why Aren't We In St. Louis: Donnie Holidae vs. The Pen Name   Sat Sep 05, 2009 9:17 am

C'mon guys. Watch. -_-
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PostSubject: Re: ICW: Why Aren't We In St. Louis: Donnie Holidae vs. The Pen Name   Sat Sep 05, 2009 11:14 am

i might
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PostSubject: Re: ICW: Why Aren't We In St. Louis: Donnie Holidae vs. The Pen Name   Sat Sep 05, 2009 12:15 pm

it kinda looked like the black and blueberry tripped and threw the match out... and then the cops came.

other than that a pretty decent match. i liked the rolling full nelson bomb thing. badass...
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PostSubject: Re: ICW: Why Aren't We In St. Louis: Donnie Holidae vs. The Pen Name   Mon Sep 07, 2009 12:47 pm

most techniques used where pretty cool

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PostSubject: Re: ICW: Why Aren't We In St. Louis: Donnie Holidae vs. The Pen Name   Mon Sep 07, 2009 1:17 pm

Thank youuuz. :]
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PostSubject: Re: ICW: Why Aren't We In St. Louis: Donnie Holidae vs. The Pen Name   Mon Sep 07, 2009 1:41 pm

"i refuse to tap to anyone who looks gay" that was amazing. i love pen name!

the flipping powerbomb thingy ma bob was sick nasty. devins package was awesome. canadian was pretty very pretty. if the cops came for u guys yesterday at ccw we had cops as well lol
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PostSubject: Re: ICW: Why Aren't We In St. Louis: Donnie Holidae vs. The Pen Name   Thu Sep 10, 2009 2:17 am

- Devin, you move so fuck smoothly, it's ridiculous
- Pen Name head spiking being thrown on the base was stupid and pointless
- I hate the way Pen Name sells. Don't just go lifeless from everything thrown at you.
- Loved the Boston Crab reversal
- Hated the clothesline take from Pen Name. At least let him hit you.
- I love how Devin is one of the few yarders who actually use 3/4 rolls instead of fake rope running. It looks soo much better
- THE DEBUT~! or whatever the name of that move really is was nice
- Destroyer was awesome, but had no build at all. Just kinda grabbed him and did it; it seemed like it was used the same way a body slam would be, and not a false finish
- Vertebreaker was so so gross and so so dangerous

Overall, it was a decent match. I think you guys could use some help with match structure, making the beginning a little bit faster and more "hot" to catch the attention early. There was only that little hip toss head spike thing, and then went immediately to rest holds. Use more chain wrestling, arms drags, hip tosses ect. Also, try to build to your moves and make them mean more. With some help from some good out of state wrestlers you can start to learn how other people put matches together and pick up on their things and you will automatically start to improve. Also, I can't get over how well Bliss moves, I mark for all the little things he does.

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PostSubject: Re: ICW: Why Aren't We In St. Louis: Donnie Holidae vs. The Pen Name   Thu Sep 10, 2009 4:46 am

Joey T wrote:
- Devin, you move so fuck smoothly, it's ridiculous
- Pen Name head spiking being thrown on the base was stupid and pointless
- I hate the way Pen Name sells. Don't just go lifeless from everything thrown at you.
- Loved the Boston Crab reversal
- Hated the clothesline take from Pen Name. At least let him hit you.
- I love how Devin is one of the few yarders who actually use 3/4 rolls instead of fake rope running. It looks soo much better
- THE DEBUT~! or whatever the name of that move really is was nice
- Destroyer was awesome, but had no build at all. Just kinda grabbed him and did it; it seemed like it was used the same way a body slam would be, and not a false finish
- Vertebreaker was so so gross and so so dangerous

Overall, it was a decent match. I think you guys could use some help with match structure, making the beginning a little bit faster and more "hot" to catch the attention early. There was only that little hip toss head spike thing, and then went immediately to rest holds. Use more chain wrestling, arms drags, hip tosses ect. Also, try to build to your moves and make them mean more. With some help from some good out of state wrestlers you can start to learn how other people put matches together and pick up on their things and you will automatically start to improve. Also, I can't get over how well Devin Bliss moves, I mark for all the little things he does.


Guess you just hate me in general?
And just love Bliss in general?

By the way, we were just having fun in this match. Wasn't a "Serious" match AT ALL.
Whatever though. I had fun with it...
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PostSubject: Re: ICW: Why Aren't We In St. Louis: Donnie Holidae vs. The Pen Name   Thu Sep 10, 2009 3:52 pm

Getting defensive isn't going to get you anywhere. I gave you feedback and friendly advice. Fuck me for trying to help you.

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PostSubject: Re: ICW: Why Aren't We In St. Louis: Donnie Holidae vs. The Pen Name   Fri Sep 11, 2009 1:06 am

I didn't get defensive. I was just simply telling you that the match was fun.

And that it honestly did seem like you hate me in general.
No big deal.
I could care less...
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PostSubject: Re: ICW: Why Aren't We In St. Louis: Donnie Holidae vs. The Pen Name   Fri Sep 11, 2009 1:14 am

I did hate a lot of things that you did in this match, which is why I gave you feedback so you can improve.

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PostSubject: Re: ICW: Why Aren't We In St. Louis: Donnie Holidae vs. The Pen Name   Fri Sep 11, 2009 1:41 am

Appreciate it. :]
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PostSubject: Re: ICW: Why Aren't We In St. Louis: Donnie Holidae vs. The Pen Name   Fri Sep 11, 2009 11:02 am

What move was THE DEBUT~! ?
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PostSubject: Re: ICW: Why Aren't We In St. Louis: Donnie Holidae vs. The Pen Name   Fri Sep 11, 2009 11:16 am

its the code red but you grab the arms instead of sitting on your opponent

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PostSubject: Re: ICW: Why Aren't We In St. Louis: Donnie Holidae vs. The Pen Name   Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:33 pm

Ohh. The Rolling Niagara Driver.
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PostSubject: Re: ICW: Why Aren't We In St. Louis: Donnie Holidae vs. The Pen Name   Fri Sep 11, 2009 2:19 pm

That's what he said. >>;
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