...Get it Jason.
WOOOOOOO!!!!!
lol

I appreciate it. >>;

More charisma shall happen.

Time for my full review. I'm fans and friends of both participants in this match, but i'll try to be as completely unbiased with this review as possible. If, for nothing else, to help both competitors become a bit better at their craft.

- "Amazing" by Kanye West has been suggest to me by at least a half dozen guys on 2KW about a current entrance song in the recent weeks. I think it isn't fit for an entrance theme song though.

- I like FX's newfound "ego" character, although if he's going to be playing up the arrogance and cockiness, he shouldn't be trying to hype up the crowd with clapping.

- Nice test of strength to begin the feel-out process, and what many people don't seem to understand is that the bridging over the knee adds a bit of a stretch to the pressure already being applied and works just a little better at wearing your opponent down. Don't know if that was intentional or not, but just figured i'd point that out.

- Gotta be careful with putting your hand and arms out when you land, Nes. Last thing we need is for you to end up with something broken.

- Nice, quick series of roll-ups to play into the aspect that wrestlers aren't paid by the hour, but by the victory. Metaphorically speaking in the case of BYW, obviously. When people (in this case, FX) are awaiting their opponent to rise up off the ground, they should show more of an anticipation mannerism rather than just "waiting for the next spot." Always keep the illusion that you're trying to stick one step ahead of your opponent.

- The double stomp into the sunset flip (previously seen during Tek -vs- Statik) was STIFF as hell. Make sure to tuck your knees in next time and don't thrust them out so hard or you may end up with a premature finish as there is enough force to knock someone out behind FX's strikes.

- As FX was playing to the camera and showboating (which he is really good at) he should have lost the advantage in the match and Bliss should have taken control.

- Bliss almost injured himself on that suplex!!

- Very awkward Snapmare, although something tells me that it was intentionally. Such a high angle snapmare would add a bit more pressure into the snap and damage the opponent. If it was intentional, good work.

- The double knees to the back was bad and painful. Hit with your shins on these attempts, not with the point of your kneecaps. Once again, some things can look stiff, just don't have to be stiff.

- Soft shots from Bliss, followed by a bizarre miss with the backhand!

- Loved the Godhand by FX. Nice, Solid Legdrop.

- Nice Spinebuster execution by Bliss. Once again, FX, stop putting your hands down first to brace the fall in your bumps! You were taught better. :-P

- I actually think Bliss had a better legdrop than FX and even got more height on it!

- One interesting, very impressive looking arm drag.

- Also, a very impressive, innovative arm drag from FX. I think with a little more practice and experience, it will become one hell of an instant highlight in FX's arsenal.

- Perfectly executed Cannonball, just Bliss was a bit too close for it.

- Nice execution on the Teknicality as well. Bliss should sell strikes (especially stomach kicks) a bit better. Don't take a strike and keep staring at your opponent to wait.

- Nobody is better at performing the cattle mutilation than FX. I love his execution of it.

- Weird, yet effective reversal by Bliss!

- Should have held on a bit longer by both participants.

- Donkey Punch was fun but placed in the wrong part of this match. There really isn't much of a flow in this match at all and just seems to be going back and forth through the motions of strikes and maneuvers. FX should have controlled the first half with Bliss gaining a small amount of momentum every now and then only to be cut off in various ways and allow FX back on the advantage.

- I have to go pick up my girl at the train station but I will review part two in full once I return!

Thanks, duder. :]

SyNN needs to finish.

Lee! Watch it. >>;
Please? :]

Pretty cool match, Some pretty cool stuff, heres some feedy.

Like everyone I've seen on GBYWN really need to work on getting the crowd into it, Have some fire in you, weather its yourself as heel or a face! Think of things to say, things to get people mad at you, catch phrases etc. FX had more energy but not much, he just went throught he motions and didnt do much more, Good entrance song though A Day To Remember !

Now lets get down to it.

-When FX entered, you rolled almost directly into him. I mean I know this is BYW and Kayfabe is pretty dead, but most people use BYW as preperation for Pro and or to improve in general. So just imagine if you were watching Ring Of Honor, WWE what ever and one guy rolled in his entrance right next to the person he "hates" and neither reacted? kinda silly yea? Shoulda moved away, put your firsts up something man!
-Both of you clapping made it silly, I aussmed Bliss was the heel, but not after the duo clap, now im lost.
-I like the start with the test of stength but make it mean soomething, since its accustom to lock up at the begining, have someone say "no" *perferably the heel" and do a test of strength sign and then beginin it, slowly... The lock from it was alright but when both your hands lock you need to have your chests collid and each of eachothers foot is behind the other, its hard to explain, easier to show... sorry hope that kinda helps.
-Liked the bridges into the bumping of bliss, now im starting to think FX is the heel. Really need to establish stuff better!
-Crucifix spot was awesome, but Bliss shoulda gotten up mad that he took you down from the test of stength and ran tawards him in anger. You took to long and didnt show enough emotion when throwing the closeline.
-Nice roll ups but Bliss needs to show more effort kicking out etc, show the confusion of getting repetitivly pinned aswell.
-Btw what are you FX? the new me? Ive seen you in like ten videos from differnt states. ha.
-stomp to the head bomb was a cool idea, but Soy Boy has a similar move hes been doing forever. And I dont quiet understand why that spot was where it was, Bliss has literally gotten no offence in at this point, its becoming a bit of a squash. FX must be the heel at this point? No crowd work on either part... But FX is dominating, hes had a long enough shine, imo.
-Also, It doenst always have to be a 2 count, espeically from the first roll up pins. its early on you have only taken one bump kick out strong.
-Comment to the camera was dumb, just sayin'
-Really bad wrestling punches, throw forarms if you cant punch good. I cant even begin to explain how to do them... Watch The Rock, Billy Gunn, or bywers like Zayne, Yakuza J etc.
-decent suplex.
-Yep FX is the new me, dropping a exact replica of the elbow i do. haha.
-Bliss really needs offence though, sell more too Bliss dont just lay there, crawl.
-still dont know who the heel and the face are.
-Horrible snapmare, you always gotta go down to one knee, and you grabbed him like a neck breaker.
-Didnt care for the strikes, really weak tbh. but decent filler.
-hated bliss' kenta combo, good knee lift though.
-The second spot with it was awesome though, loved it.
-Im getting busy now so i gotta wrap up this reply, good leg drop by bliss.

Overall pretty good, Need to work on punches, and it was really long regualr match should be 10-14 min long. this was around 20, Mega long guys. Cool spots, and such. Just work on placement, selling, working the crowd. and as always the basics.

Hopfully next time i wont gget interupted replying!~

-Lee

i thought both of ya'll did good
i like the vertabreaker reversals it was funny because it was never actually executed
but good match
FX was funny with the stretch your groin thing

fuck you bliss you ask for feedy i leave it then nothing?

die!~

Thanks Andrews I appreciate it a lot. If you can later review the rest. And Im going to look up the punches XD


FX!~

If I get a chance I will man, Work more on hoe to work the properness of a match. You got loads of potential