i would write up a review . but im lazy buds still lvoe you tho <3

you should for me and blisss

FX!~

Yeah!

Dude FX when are you gonna take me to one of these events! Leaving Joey out of Super shows is uncool take me with you!

More feedy please???? I really want Lee Andrews or Ian Finnegan to review it. Ian because he is the type of honest I like and I trust him and Lee Andrews because I want him to help me out a bit

FX!~

Yeah, I'm with you on this one.
Ian, Lee. Get on it? :[

Alright here is my review. sorry if i sound like a dick guys
-Bliss needs charisma man. are you face heel? robot /human? need some emotion from you bud
-FX same deal. usually you have a lot more just weird that you really didn’t establish your self in this video
-and at the beginning FX you play face but later in the match do heel tactics? haha
-Test of strength chest to chest. bliss keep your face up. try to look big in the situation like FX is doing
-pretty good bridge wish FX woulda went down all the way.
-FX over powered him pretty easily make it look a little bit more believable. good bridge and better placement of the knee by FX
crusifix pin could have been smoother. but i still liked it
it looked like bliss didnt know the rolled up was coming and it looked kinda hesitant for a second
Slow sunset flip. i know that base is holey so maybe thats why. liking these fast pins <3
kick out with a lot of eneergy bliss its sooo early in the match!
missed kick
the double stomp powerbomb thing can be executed soooo much better. see soyboy do it. craig took it well too
BLISS DO NOT TAKE SUPLEXES like that your ankles will hate you if you do. exectued nicely taken badly
weird that you layed his arms down like that haha
weird snapmere on both parts. bliss face the other direction. FX go down on your right knee
liking the knees to the back
some decent strikes. missed backfist
didn’t like how build up all those strikes just for a knee to the head.
But the exchange after that was very nice! but bliss when taking them keep your arm down dont be afraig of getting hit . you werent blocking them you just looked hesitant
nice legdrop
liked the spine buster. FX you kinda put your hands down i dont know why? i know you know not too
Bliss i love your legdrop <333
RANDOM TIME FOR AN ARMDRAG haha. and usually you dont set them up you just surprise them with it. plus its like 6 min in the match. bad placing but good execution
FX had a good idea and would have been sweet. but was kinda sloppy. why arm drags now
Senton after arm drag? lol i love yarding. but i did like the move itself. and that you followed up
pretty sweet variations of a famasser
when talking to him put him in a hold or something dont make it look like your kissing him on the neck . save that for later!
sweet switiching of cattle mutalations
i like your combo bliss <3
follow up bliss just dont let him get you right away
donkey punch~!
2nd one didnt look very impactful BLiss could off overselled it and it woulda looked better hahah.

First part is done. I know its hard to work of the non exsistant crowd. but i noticed it was like big move pull the guy up other guy hits you does a move . then he pulls him up and punches him, he does move. make it flow better. and i will start the 2nd part shortly. sorry if i sound like a dick i love ya both <3

2nd part WOOO~!~
-Heel tactic very random? but was sick hit him hard
-bliss you gave him your arm! but i like the head but curbstomp for some reason =)
-i dont get why you guys bot h got up slowly? FX you were on fire hitting your moves. you shoulda went for something and he would have cought you in the belly to belly. and bliss hook under not over like perfection said
-dont crawl over there and talk to him but him in seomething
-bliss you need some charisma i love you but you need to look like your enjoying it somewhat
-sick “dragons gate” ~! loved it~!
-follow up devin you just hit a big move!. make talking less noticable please~!
-good sault
-mean backfist
-loving these submissions from FX
-FX dont let up tho be on him. speciially since you have the upper hand!.
sick chicken wing/cross face deal rules’
weak back elbows
mean backfist!!! so random love it hahahahaha
BLiss you got up before him too you were jsut getting your ass kciked nasty and no selling of you being hurt at all
liking you submisiion!. liked the little bit of struggle as well!
LovING THAT FX reversed it ~!@ nice~!
YES smooth. that you used the arm and then went to the face more realistic!
playing face again FX? i really like that you have all these trademark moves. bliss you usually bump narsty this match you just not feeling it?
damn big will
way to long of a set up for a missed elbow drop imo
BLiss please more charisma not just waving your hand to get up!
and again bliss you were jsut getting your ass kicked and you look fine
mean stomps
LOL at you falling on the base you seem to do that everymatch <3
trying to go for the pin after two stomps hahaha best
bliss do some offense its your chance you have just been walking around
could have been a better way to set up DDT. Right sided DDT . work left yall know that. good bump Bliss yes!!! bliss you seem off your game i dont know why =(
FX you were jsut down for like 2 min cause of your elbow but now you can pick him up with ease. come on bud i know you know this
good teasing of vertabraker. but i wanted to see it!
good reversal outa burning halo! wooo
into a pretty nice F5 coulda been hit with a little bit more power

Overall decent match. doesnt seem like you guys planned much maybe besides beginning and end. i have seen ebtter outa both of you. sorry again to be a bag of duech if you have any questions ask me. i left out some stuff cause im tired. but both need more charisma. FX you usually do. bliss you need too badly. placing things in matches needs to be worked on. selling etc basics. i know its yarding but you guys asked for a review. love you both hope you enjoyed this <3

...Get it Jason.
WOOOOOOO!!!!!
lol

I appreciate it. >>;

More charisma shall happen.

Time for my full review. I'm fans and friends of both participants in this match, but i'll try to be as completely unbiased with this review as possible. If, for nothing else, to help both competitors become a bit better at their craft.

- "Amazing" by Kanye West has been suggest to me by at least a half dozen guys on 2KW about a current entrance song in the recent weeks. I think it isn't fit for an entrance theme song though.

- I like FX's newfound "ego" character, although if he's going to be playing up the arrogance and cockiness, he shouldn't be trying to hype up the crowd with clapping.

- Nice test of strength to begin the feel-out process, and what many people don't seem to understand is that the bridging over the knee adds a bit of a stretch to the pressure already being applied and works just a little better at wearing your opponent down. Don't know if that was intentional or not, but just figured i'd point that out.

- Gotta be careful with putting your hand and arms out when you land, Nes. Last thing we need is for you to end up with something broken.

- Nice, quick series of roll-ups to play into the aspect that wrestlers aren't paid by the hour, but by the victory. Metaphorically speaking in the case of BYW, obviously. When people (in this case, FX) are awaiting their opponent to rise up off the ground, they should show more of an anticipation mannerism rather than just "waiting for the next spot." Always keep the illusion that you're trying to stick one step ahead of your opponent.

- The double stomp into the sunset flip (previously seen during Tek -vs- Statik) was STIFF as hell. Make sure to tuck your knees in next time and don't thrust them out so hard or you may end up with a premature finish as there is enough force to knock someone out behind FX's strikes.

- As FX was playing to the camera and showboating (which he is really good at) he should have lost the advantage in the match and Bliss should have taken control.

- Bliss almost injured himself on that suplex!!

- Very awkward Snapmare, although something tells me that it was intentionally. Such a high angle snapmare would add a bit more pressure into the snap and damage the opponent. If it was intentional, good work.

- The double knees to the back was bad and painful. Hit with your shins on these attempts, not with the point of your kneecaps. Once again, some things can look stiff, just don't have to be stiff.

- Soft shots from Bliss, followed by a bizarre miss with the backhand!

- Loved the Godhand by FX. Nice, Solid Legdrop.

- Nice Spinebuster execution by Bliss. Once again, FX, stop putting your hands down first to brace the fall in your bumps! You were taught better. :-P

- I actually think Bliss had a better legdrop than FX and even got more height on it!

- One interesting, very impressive looking arm drag.

- Also, a very impressive, innovative arm drag from FX. I think with a little more practice and experience, it will become one hell of an instant highlight in FX's arsenal.

- Perfectly executed Cannonball, just Bliss was a bit too close for it.

- Nice execution on the Teknicality as well. Bliss should sell strikes (especially stomach kicks) a bit better. Don't take a strike and keep staring at your opponent to wait.

- Nobody is better at performing the cattle mutilation than FX. I love his execution of it.

- Weird, yet effective reversal by Bliss!

- Should have held on a bit longer by both participants.

- Donkey Punch was fun but placed in the wrong part of this match. There really isn't much of a flow in this match at all and just seems to be going back and forth through the motions of strikes and maneuvers. FX should have controlled the first half with Bliss gaining a small amount of momentum every now and then only to be cut off in various ways and allow FX back on the advantage.

- I have to go pick up my girl at the train station but I will review part two in full once I return!

Thanks, duder. :]

SyNN needs to finish.

Lee! Watch it. >>;
Please? :]

Pretty cool match, Some pretty cool stuff, heres some feedy.

Like everyone I've seen on GBYWN really need to work on getting the crowd into it, Have some fire in you, weather its yourself as heel or a face! Think of things to say, things to get people mad at you, catch phrases etc. FX had more energy but not much, he just went throught he motions and didnt do much more, Good entrance song though A Day To Remember !

Now lets get down to it.

-When FX entered, you rolled almost directly into him. I mean I know this is BYW and Kayfabe is pretty dead, but most people use BYW as preperation for Pro and or to improve in general. So just imagine if you were watching Ring Of Honor, WWE what ever and one guy rolled in his entrance right next to the person he "hates" and neither reacted? kinda silly yea? Shoulda moved away, put your firsts up something man!
-Both of you clapping made it silly, I aussmed Bliss was the heel, but not after the duo clap, now im lost.
-I like the start with the test of stength but make it mean soomething, since its accustom to lock up at the begining, have someone say "no" *perferably the heel" and do a test of strength sign and then beginin it, slowly... The lock from it was alright but when both your hands lock you need to have your chests collid and each of eachothers foot is behind the other, its hard to explain, easier to show... sorry hope that kinda helps.
-Liked the bridges into the bumping of bliss, now im starting to think FX is the heel. Really need to establish stuff better!
-Crucifix spot was awesome, but Bliss shoulda gotten up mad that he took you down from the test of stength and ran tawards him in anger. You took to long and didnt show enough emotion when throwing the closeline.
-Nice roll ups but Bliss needs to show more effort kicking out etc, show the confusion of getting repetitivly pinned aswell.
-Btw what are you FX? the new me? Ive seen you in like ten videos from differnt states. ha.
-stomp to the head bomb was a cool idea, but Soy Boy has a similar move hes been doing forever. And I dont quiet understand why that spot was where it was, Bliss has literally gotten no offence in at this point, its becoming a bit of a squash. FX must be the heel at this point? No crowd work on either part... But FX is dominating, hes had a long enough shine, imo.
-Also, It doenst always have to be a 2 count, espeically from the first roll up pins. its early on you have only taken one bump kick out strong.
-Comment to the camera was dumb, just sayin'
-Really bad wrestling punches, throw forarms if you cant punch good. I cant even begin to explain how to do them... Watch The Rock, Billy Gunn, or bywers like Zayne, Yakuza J etc.
-decent suplex.
-Yep FX is the new me, dropping a exact replica of the elbow i do. haha.
-Bliss really needs offence though, sell more too Bliss dont just lay there, crawl.
-still dont know who the heel and the face are.
-Horrible snapmare, you always gotta go down to one knee, and you grabbed him like a neck breaker.
-Didnt care for the strikes, really weak tbh. but decent filler.
-hated bliss' kenta combo, good knee lift though.
-The second spot with it was awesome though, loved it.
-Im getting busy now so i gotta wrap up this reply, good leg drop by bliss.

Overall pretty good, Need to work on punches, and it was really long regualr match should be 10-14 min long. this was around 20, Mega long guys. Cool spots, and such. Just work on placement, selling, working the crowd. and as always the basics.

Hopfully next time i wont gget interupted replying!~

-Lee

i thought both of ya'll did good
i like the vertabreaker reversals it was funny because it was never actually executed
but good match
FX was funny with the stretch your groin thing

fuck you bliss you ask for feedy i leave it then nothing?

die!~