Donnie Holidae v FX

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 7:34 pm

-test of strength sequence was good
-gotta fall quicker on that crucifix, took too long, especially for the pace you're trying to set with these pins
-fx's double stomps are good, good combo
-fx set up really weird for that snapmare, idk if devin turned his head or it was fx but it looked odd
-devin has no offense yet, not even countering something, i'm suprised
-the strike combo was VERY sloppy
-the 2nd faster strike combos were WAY better, lots of explosiveness. Tip though, with the backhands you guys are swinging too high when you're supposed to miss and it looks unrealistic. Swing right at their head and they'll duck, if they don't well thats their fault not yours.
-spinebuster was good, good form
-so much height haha, good legdrop devin
-devin you hooked really well and really deep on that arm drag which is awesome, cuz most people don't BUT you stayed too high thus making it hard for FX to get over you and it made it look a little sloppy.
-wow...idk what that was. Body scissors japanese arm drag? FX you're the man.
-i guess i should call you Tek.
-that ref is a huge dude.
-the cattle mutilation battle was sweet, and devin that is suchhh a good combo, never stop doing it.
-so far in this match i feel that the heel and face have not been distinguished that well, FX did a little with his calling for the dragons gate and not hitting it but that's all i've noticed
-belly to belly's hook under the arms not over, you could get so much more power out of that if you had something to really pull instead of wrapping your arms around him, plus its safer for him
-such a painful submissionnnn
-this is submission central right here
-devin should be selling where the submissions had been effecting him, maybe he should've went for a submission but his arms were shot or just holding his neck
-GOOD DDT
-the pace got SO slow through that
-good false finishes, was hoping for the burning halo cuz i love that move but good stuff
really fun watch.

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 7:37 pm

Thank you. :]

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 8:45 pm

Anymore?

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 8:46 pm

I watched this and liked it a lot. I'll watch it again and leave a lengthier reply. Very Happy

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 8:58 pm

Can't wait for it. :]

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 10:22 pm

Thank you perfection and I cant wait for Ryan Storms review

FX!~

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 10:23 pm

Big Brother Bliss wrote:

Twistedoutkast wrote:

i love your matches FX.. very clean.. especially against bliss.

That seemed kinda mean. D:

actually it was made to be a complement you both wrestle clean!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Tue Jun 23, 2009 1:33 am

Twistedoutkast wrote:

Big Brother Bliss wrote:

Twistedoutkast wrote:

i love your matches FX.. very clean.. especially against bliss.

That seemed kinda mean. D:

actually it was made to be a complement you both wrestle clean!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My mistake. haha. I love you! Very Happy

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Tue Jun 23, 2009 1:47 am

i didnt know FX wuz portarican (however the hell you spell it)

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Tue Jun 23, 2009 2:01 am

DarKStaR<^> TheOnlyOneFX wrote:

I would like Ian, Pj, Demorest, Rage, Perfection, Blackheart, and Danny D to give me some feedy on this cuz they are very good at the criticing

I hope one or all give some feed XD

FX!~

I was, but then I saw you misspelled my name. Why would I spell "Black" normally? That's not cool. A 'q', a 'u', and an 'e' is cool. So cool the Colons would agree. So fuck you.

No, just kidding.

The earlier chops were slow (I think, been like nineteen minutes since that part), and like Perfection said the first sequence of backhand attempts was slow, but then the second was ninja quick. I didn't notice your hands going too high for the miss, though it wouldn't surprise me if you did since that's a common mistake people make.

I loved first the... I haven't even heard a name for that... Like a modified crossface, which you then added a cravate into. I was like, "Coolio." I liked the effort from Bliss when he went for the same crossface but with the legs locked, however he didn't set up the legs very well to start (kind of looked rushed), and if he, too, had added a cravate I would have been very happy. But still those two holds were sweet.

"TWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Good ref.

The vertebraker reversals were very smooth and it led up to the finish very well. The finish was probably the cleanest part of the match, not to say other parts weren't, as there were a lot of well executed spots throughout.

The pace of the match as a whole didn't really make it feel competitive, since the majority of it was just move after move after move, with isolated parts where things got a bit more heated, like the Cattle Mutilation battle. However, the environment you guys were wrestling in, with all of the fan involvement made that kind of pace feel appropriate.

A lot of innovation from you, by the way. That was pretty sick. And what botches there were (like Bliss choking up on your arm too high for the arm drag) were the kind of botches where it made something look cooler.

So overall, great match. I was cracking up from all the talking, too.

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Tue Jun 23, 2009 2:13 am

Adrian Blaqueheart wrote:

DarKStaR<^> TheOnlyOneFX wrote:

I would like Ian, Pj, Demorest, Rage, Perfection, Blackheart, and Danny D to give me some feedy on this cuz they are very good at the criticing

I hope one or all give some feed XD

FX!~

I was, but then I saw you misspelled my name. Why would I spell "Black" normally? That's not cool. A 'q', a 'u', and an 'e' is cool. So cool the Colons would agree. So fuck you.

No, just kidding.

The earlier chops were slow (I think, been like nineteen minutes since that part), and like Perfection said the first sequence of backhand attempts was slow, but then the second was ninja quick. I didn't notice your hands going too high for the miss, though it wouldn't surprise me if you did since that's a common mistake people make.

I loved first the... I haven't even heard a name for that... Like a modified crossface, which you then added a cravate into. I was like, "Coolio." I liked the effort from Bliss when he went for the same crossface but with the legs locked, however he didn't set up the legs very well to start (kind of looked rushed), and if he, too, had added a cravate I would have been very happy. But still those two holds were sweet.

"TWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Good ref.

The vertebraker reversals were very smooth and it led up to the finish very well. The finish was probably the cleanest part of the match, not to say other parts weren't, as there were a lot of well executed spots throughout.

The pace of the match as a whole didn't really make it feel competitive, since the majority of it was just move after move after move, with isolated parts where things got a bit more heated, like the Cattle Mutilation battle. However, the environment you guys were wrestling in, with all of the fan involvement made that kind of pace feel appropriate.

A lot of innovation from you, by the way. That was pretty sick. And what botches there were (like Bliss choking up on your arm too high for the arm drag) were the kind of botches where it made something look cooler.

So overall, great match. I was cracking up from all the talking, too.

Sorry bout the miss spell you know i love you XD

and thank you =)

FX!~

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Tue Jun 23, 2009 2:15 am

i would write up a review . but im lazy buds still lvoe you tho <3

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Tue Jun 23, 2009 2:46 am

you should for me and blisss

FX!~

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Tue Jun 23, 2009 12:04 pm

Yeah!

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Tue Jun 23, 2009 7:33 pm

Dude FX when are you gonna take me to one of these events! Leaving Joey out of Super shows is uncool take me with you!

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Tue Jun 23, 2009 9:34 pm

Joey Adams wrote:

Dude FX when are you gonna take me to one of these events! Leaving Joey out of Super shows is uncool take me with you!

I had to drive all the way to Indy to pick that nigga up. >>;

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Wed Jun 24, 2009 12:40 am

More feedy please???? I really want Lee Andrews or Ian Finnegan to review it. Ian because he is the type of honest I like and I trust him and Lee Andrews because I want him to help me out a bit

FX!~

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Wed Jun 24, 2009 12:54 am

Yeah, I'm with you on this one.
Ian, Lee. Get on it? :[

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Wed Jun 24, 2009 10:39 am

Alright here is my review. sorry if i sound like a dick guys
-Bliss needs charisma man. are you face heel? robot /human? need some emotion from you bud
-FX same deal. usually you have a lot more just weird that you really didn’t establish your self in this video
-and at the beginning FX you play face but later in the match do heel tactics? haha
-Test of strength chest to chest. bliss keep your face up. try to look big in the situation like FX is doing
-pretty good bridge wish FX woulda went down all the way.
-FX over powered him pretty easily make it look a little bit more believable. good bridge and better placement of the knee by FX
crusifix pin could have been smoother. but i still liked it
it looked like bliss didnt know the rolled up was coming and it looked kinda hesitant for a second
Slow sunset flip. i know that base is holey so maybe thats why. liking these fast pins <3
kick out with a lot of eneergy bliss its sooo early in the match!
missed kick
the double stomp powerbomb thing can be executed soooo much better. see soyboy do it. craig took it well too
BLISS DO NOT TAKE SUPLEXES like that your ankles will hate you if you do. exectued nicely taken badly
weird that you layed his arms down like that haha
weird snapmere on both parts. bliss face the other direction. FX go down on your right knee
liking the knees to the back
some decent strikes. missed backfist
didn’t like how build up all those strikes just for a knee to the head.
But the exchange after that was very nice! but bliss when taking them keep your arm down dont be afraig of getting hit . you werent blocking them you just looked hesitant
nice legdrop
liked the spine buster. FX you kinda put your hands down i dont know why? i know you know not too
Bliss i love your legdrop <333
RANDOM TIME FOR AN ARMDRAG haha. and usually you dont set them up you just surprise them with it. plus its like 6 min in the match. bad placing but good execution
FX had a good idea and would have been sweet. but was kinda sloppy. why arm drags now
Senton after arm drag? lol i love yarding. but i did like the move itself. and that you followed up
pretty sweet variations of a famasser
when talking to him put him in a hold or something dont make it look like your kissing him on the neck . save that for later!
sweet switiching of cattle mutalations
i like your combo bliss <3
follow up bliss just dont let him get you right away
donkey punch~!
2nd one didnt look very impactful BLiss could off overselled it and it woulda looked better hahah.

First part is done. I know its hard to work of the non exsistant crowd. but i noticed it was like big move pull the guy up other guy hits you does a move . then he pulls him up and punches him, he does move. make it flow better. and i will start the 2nd part shortly. sorry if i sound like a dick i love ya both <3

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Wed Jun 24, 2009 11:01 am

2nd part WOOO~!~
-Heel tactic very random? but was sick hit him hard
-bliss you gave him your arm! but i like the head but curbstomp for some reason =)
-i dont get why you guys bot h got up slowly? FX you were on fire hitting your moves. you shoulda went for something and he would have cought you in the belly to belly. and bliss hook under not over like perfection said
-dont crawl over there and talk to him but him in seomething
-bliss you need some charisma i love you but you need to look like your enjoying it somewhat
-sick “dragons gate” ~! loved it~!
-follow up devin you just hit a big move!. make talking less noticable please~!
-good sault
-mean backfist
-loving these submissions from FX
-FX dont let up tho be on him. speciially since you have the upper hand!.
sick chicken wing/cross face deal rules’
weak back elbows
mean backfist!!! so random love it hahahahaha
BLiss you got up before him too you were jsut getting your ass kciked nasty and no selling of you being hurt at all
liking you submisiion!. liked the little bit of struggle as well!
LovING THAT FX reversed it ~!@ nice~!
YES smooth. that you used the arm and then went to the face more realistic!
playing face again FX? i really like that you have all these trademark moves. bliss you usually bump narsty this match you just not feeling it?
damn big will
way to long of a set up for a missed elbow drop imo
BLiss please more charisma not just waving your hand to get up!
and again bliss you were jsut getting your ass kicked and you look fine
mean stomps
LOL at you falling on the base you seem to do that everymatch <3
trying to go for the pin after two stomps hahaha best
bliss do some offense its your chance you have just been walking around
could have been a better way to set up DDT. Right sided DDT . work left yall know that. good bump Bliss yes!!! bliss you seem off your game i dont know why =(
FX you were jsut down for like 2 min cause of your elbow but now you can pick him up with ease. come on bud i know you know this
good teasing of vertabraker. but i wanted to see it!
good reversal outa burning halo! wooo
into a pretty nice F5 coulda been hit with a little bit more power

Overall decent match. doesnt seem like you guys planned much maybe besides beginning and end. i have seen ebtter outa both of you. sorry again to be a bag of duech if you have any questions ask me. i left out some stuff cause im tired. but both need more charisma. FX you usually do. bliss you need too badly. placing things in matches needs to be worked on. selling etc basics. i know its yarding but you guys asked for a review. love you both hope you enjoyed this <3

Donnie Holidae v FX

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