Donnie Holidae v FX

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 3:37 pm

DarKStaR<^> TheOnlyOneFX wrote:

I would like Ian, Pj, Demorest, Rage, Perfection, Blackheart, and Danny D to give me some feedy on this cuz they are very good at the criticing

I hope one or all give some feed XD

FX!~

I like this idea.

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 4:14 pm

Bliss use your big brother powers to get them to do it XD

lol

FX!~

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 6:04 pm

It doesn't work like that. D:
Ha.

Feedy please. :[

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 6:18 pm

hahah i will do this after i eat my dinner, only because I love you both.

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 6:20 pm

Thank you!
We love you too. Don't you forget it.

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 6:38 pm

This match was great.
Whoever the cameraman was, he was phenomenal. >>;

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 6:43 pm

Lulz.

And Ryan Storm should watch it. ;]

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 7:15 pm

Seriously. Must watch. :]

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 7:20 pm

Seriously.
Who was the cameraman?

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 7:34 pm

Bliss.

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 7:34 pm

-test of strength sequence was good
-gotta fall quicker on that crucifix, took too long, especially for the pace you're trying to set with these pins
-fx's double stomps are good, good combo
-fx set up really weird for that snapmare, idk if devin turned his head or it was fx but it looked odd
-devin has no offense yet, not even countering something, i'm suprised
-the strike combo was VERY sloppy
-the 2nd faster strike combos were WAY better, lots of explosiveness. Tip though, with the backhands you guys are swinging too high when you're supposed to miss and it looks unrealistic. Swing right at their head and they'll duck, if they don't well thats their fault not yours.
-spinebuster was good, good form
-so much height haha, good legdrop devin
-devin you hooked really well and really deep on that arm drag which is awesome, cuz most people don't BUT you stayed too high thus making it hard for FX to get over you and it made it look a little sloppy.
-wow...idk what that was. Body scissors japanese arm drag? FX you're the man.
-i guess i should call you Tek.
-that ref is a huge dude.
-the cattle mutilation battle was sweet, and devin that is suchhh a good combo, never stop doing it.
-so far in this match i feel that the heel and face have not been distinguished that well, FX did a little with his calling for the dragons gate and not hitting it but that's all i've noticed
-belly to belly's hook under the arms not over, you could get so much more power out of that if you had something to really pull instead of wrapping your arms around him, plus its safer for him
-such a painful submissionnnn
-this is submission central right here
-devin should be selling where the submissions had been effecting him, maybe he should've went for a submission but his arms were shot or just holding his neck
-GOOD DDT
-the pace got SO slow through that
-good false finishes, was hoping for the burning halo cuz i love that move but good stuff
really fun watch.

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 7:37 pm

Thank you. :]

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 8:45 pm

Anymore?

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 8:46 pm

I watched this and liked it a lot. I'll watch it again and leave a lengthier reply. Very Happy

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 8:58 pm

Can't wait for it. :]

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 10:22 pm

Thank you perfection and I cant wait for Ryan Storms review

FX!~

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Mon Jun 22, 2009 10:23 pm

Big Brother Bliss wrote:

Twistedoutkast wrote:

i love your matches FX.. very clean.. especially against bliss.

That seemed kinda mean. D:

actually it was made to be a complement you both wrestle clean!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Tue Jun 23, 2009 1:33 am

Twistedoutkast wrote:

Big Brother Bliss wrote:

Twistedoutkast wrote:

i love your matches FX.. very clean.. especially against bliss.

That seemed kinda mean. D:

actually it was made to be a complement you both wrestle clean!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

My mistake. haha. I love you! Very Happy

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Tue Jun 23, 2009 1:47 am

i didnt know FX wuz portarican (however the hell you spell it)

Subject: Re: Donnie Holidae v FX Tue Jun 23, 2009 2:01 am

DarKStaR<^> TheOnlyOneFX wrote:

I would like Ian, Pj, Demorest, Rage, Perfection, Blackheart, and Danny D to give me some feedy on this cuz they are very good at the criticing

I hope one or all give some feed XD

FX!~

I was, but then I saw you misspelled my name. Why would I spell "Black" normally? That's not cool. A 'q', a 'u', and an 'e' is cool. So cool the Colons would agree. So fuck you.

No, just kidding.

The earlier chops were slow (I think, been like nineteen minutes since that part), and like Perfection said the first sequence of backhand attempts was slow, but then the second was ninja quick. I didn't notice your hands going too high for the miss, though it wouldn't surprise me if you did since that's a common mistake people make.

I loved first the... I haven't even heard a name for that... Like a modified crossface, which you then added a cravate into. I was like, "Coolio." I liked the effort from Bliss when he went for the same crossface but with the legs locked, however he didn't set up the legs very well to start (kind of looked rushed), and if he, too, had added a cravate I would have been very happy. But still those two holds were sweet.

"TWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" Good ref.

The vertebraker reversals were very smooth and it led up to the finish very well. The finish was probably the cleanest part of the match, not to say other parts weren't, as there were a lot of well executed spots throughout.

The pace of the match as a whole didn't really make it feel competitive, since the majority of it was just move after move after move, with isolated parts where things got a bit more heated, like the Cattle Mutilation battle. However, the environment you guys were wrestling in, with all of the fan involvement made that kind of pace feel appropriate.

A lot of innovation from you, by the way. That was pretty sick. And what botches there were (like Bliss choking up on your arm too high for the arm drag) were the kind of botches where it made something look cooler.

So overall, great match. I was cracking up from all the talking, too.

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