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PostSubject: New match against D.rake You.nger   Wed Jan 18, 2012 8:39 pm



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PostSubject: Re: New match against D.rake You.nger   Wed Jan 18, 2012 11:16 pm

-Well that guy sure knows how to announce.
-That hiptoss right at the beginning looked awkward, like you initially were feeding to take an armdrag but then remembered the spot, but maybe it was just the camera angle.
-Dec back body drop for a big guy.
-I think your heel work on the outside was a little weak. Not bad, but just not enough. Firstly, I come from the school of thought that says everything in wrestling should be just a little over-the-top, and your reactions to the crowd and especially to the 'Chicken!' chants were anything but over-the-top. But really, that's just my opinion. Moreover, when working such a big name as Drake, and in his hometown no less, you need to play up everything he does. He's already over, but you're there to make him shine like he deserves (or maybe doesn't) to, so play up everything and make him look like a million bucks, because he should do the same thing right back.
-Ugh, screw you stationary cameras.
-Good selling of the chops on the outside. Same deal with headbutt.
-When you guys were both trying to suplex each other, it made no sense for him to just be like "Aight, enough dickin' around" and just toss you over. Maybe he just didn't because he's the established (as fuck) vet and didn't feel like it, but you should definitely hit the dude or something to try and get the upper hand on the bigger guy. Good bump, though.
-Nice cut-off, but it took a little too long. A heel's cut-off should be quick and sick, something that makes the crowd think that the face was really stopped. You should have waited to take off your straps and play to the crowd until after the rope-hung legsweep (which was pretty good, btw, one of the better ones I've seen you do) or after the pin. Once he's cut-off and you're putting the heat on him, you've got all the time in the world to play to the crowd, but a good cut-off should be fast, so make it fast and don't mess with the crowd until afterward.
-When you take off your straps, it makes your ass look huge, man. No homo. Just sayin'. Maybe you should wear that singlet with those blue and white camo pants/shorts you have, just to even out your body and look better.
-Good sidewalk slam backbreaker, solid and safe.
-Forearms are nice for big guys to use as strikes. Chops are good too, if you can throw them well, but because Drake did a lot of chops, it was good that you did forearms. Plus, it makes bigger guys look more dominant than chops do.
-You raked his eyes right in front of the ref. Get some heat and pull the ref aside and tell him nothing happened. Let your manager (though you don't have one here) put on some heat, or choke the dude out with your boot while he's on the ground while you're talking with the ref. The ref didn't do anything about your blatant cheating, so make sure you initiate it, otherwise the concept of cheating has no meaning because you can just get away with it.
-Took a while on that superplex, but good bump. The selling could've been better, but again, I say that because I like guys who overplay things. Sell to the cheap seats, yo.
-All those Irish Whips seemed super unnecessary, but the DDT was solid as fuccck. Good job.
-You're a big guy, Anthony, so you've got some muscle on you. Watch how Auburn or Bliss or other guys toss niggas with their exploders and take notes. Don't do them like I do, because mine are shitty. I think you might have been thinking about how close he was gonna land to the ropes, though, so if that's the case, I totally understand.
-Anti-climatic finish. Shoulda just manned up and taken the Drake's Landing. Wink
-A nice solid little match, one of those that you send to promoters to get a feel for you. It's cool that you were able to work a guy like Drake, I wish you could've done a little more with him, though. I don't know how much of this you were able to plan yourself, so that factors in, but as someone said on here recently you should always assert yourself and say some stuff you want to do, otherwise everyone will walk all over you, especially in WCWO.

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PostSubject: Re: New match against D.rake You.nger   Thu Jan 19, 2012 4:17 pm

Thanks much, boss. I'll work on the over selling thing a bit. It just made more sense to me to not sell quite as much because of the size difference.

Oh, and the exploder sucked. I didn't care about ropes. I was just blown up.
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PostSubject: Re: New match against D.rake You.nger   Wed Jan 25, 2012 3:44 pm

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