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PostSubject: BYW Monthly Recap Sampling For Feedback   Sun Dec 18, 2011 7:00 am


It's been almost 6 months since I've done one of these so I wanted to test the waters & see what you people thought about the new BYW Monthly recaps. Don't like the font? Think the names take up too much of the video? Hate my voice? Perhaps you'd rather have the results before or after the Music Video? I wanna hear as much feedback as heavenly possible on how I should do these recaps, because when I start uploading them, that's the way the next 2 years worth of shows are going to look like. Have at it, my friends.
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PostSubject: Re: BYW Monthly Recap Sampling For Feedback   Sun Dec 18, 2011 1:39 pm

rad....its the same as its always been lol.
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PostSubject: Re: BYW Monthly Recap Sampling For Feedback   Sun Dec 18, 2011 3:22 pm

KingTek wrote:
rad....its the same as its always been lol.


I get that, but should I change it?
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PostSubject: Re: BYW Monthly Recap Sampling For Feedback   Sun Dec 18, 2011 3:25 pm

yeah man. fresh look every so often is good.
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PostSubject: Re: BYW Monthly Recap Sampling For Feedback   Sun Dec 18, 2011 4:10 pm

KingTek wrote:
yeah man. fresh look every so often is good.

But how should I change it? I have a LOT of ideas, but I wanna know what's more watchable for people. We could go without my audio. we could give the results at the beginning of the video then show the MV in full. Maybe people wont like that the results cover so much of the vid during the presentation. maybe it doesn't bother anyone at all. I just wanna know. Some people will NEVER watch it. Some people will ALWAYS watch it. I just wanna try to clinch those who are on the fence.
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PostSubject: Re: BYW Monthly Recap Sampling For Feedback   Sun Dec 18, 2011 4:48 pm

I think you should just recap current stuff. You're never going to catch up lol.
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PostSubject: Re: BYW Monthly Recap Sampling For Feedback   Sun Dec 18, 2011 6:02 pm

teejay wrote:
I think you should just recap current stuff. You're never going to catch up lol.


I'll catch up! I'll catch up IF IT KILLS ME! WERWRAR
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PostSubject: Re: BYW Monthly Recap Sampling For Feedback   Thu Dec 22, 2011 1:23 pm

Cooler logos and fonts I think would help out a lot. I don't know if you're good with photoshop or anything like that, but surely there's someone that is that would be willing to hook you up either way...

I like your voice, but like.... a little less. Not less words necessarily, but less yelling. It's kinda hard to understand. Instead of using a promo type voice like you are, maybe try using more of a commentary voice. Not an ROH commentary voice, either.... I always feel like they're yelling at me too. Just kind of an enunciated talk with emphasis in certain places to give it that wrestling feel, ya know?

I also feel like you should let the wrestling show more. Maybe have the titles be smaller or nearer the bottom of the screen or something like that. I mean, the main point is to highlight the wrestling, right? It's hard to see.

Otherwise I think this was pretty easy to watch. I mean, maybe you could make yourself a nice intro video or something like that. Just a quick little introduction so I know this is a BYW Monthly video right off the bat, even without seeing the titles or whatever. Intros make things look professional for some reason.

Then, maybe you could also do the introduction to the show you're highlighting as like a promo, with you actually being on camera talking about it with maybe a smaller version of the video beginning to play next to your head or something like that. I think that would look super legit. Then once you've introduced the show, start getting into the results. At the end maybe do another little promo about what might be in the next one or something like that... Give the viewers something to look forward to. Like, yeah I liked this video and show, but what's going to make me come back to watch the next show that I may not care so much about right now. Teasers and trailers and shit would go great here. People have those pre-made for you, too. Haha. Maybe even mix in some hangouts clips in the middle of the video. That'd be neat. Haha.

Of course, this is all just my opinion, and you can take it in whatever way you please. To me, though, these are the things that stand out as possible places for improvement. I think if these specific things changed, I would definitely become a more active watcher of your videos...
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PostSubject: Re: BYW Monthly Recap Sampling For Feedback   Fri Dec 23, 2011 6:35 am

I really appreciate the very detailed opinions.

Unfortunately I'm very limited by my studio editor so what I have is what I got as far as fonts.

I agree my voice was a little high in this video. I'm looking to make the future vioceovers sound important, but less loud.

I'll be doing little hype promos introducing each event. Later in future months I'll be mentioning more specific stuff, like length of title reigns in days & backsory that isn't reflected in the matches themselves. this first episode doesn't have much of that.

I've played around with the size of the font & unfortunately I have a lot of worries about the lettering being too small to actually be able to see. I've edited the sparks off the fonts so I'm really hoping that the words will allow you to see the video behind it.

The general idea I want to convey is a short recap show that is more of a guide of events that people can use to see what matches happened where & if they think they want to know more than they can go & find the matches on youtube, if they want to dig deeper.
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