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PostSubject: Devin Bliss vs. AJ Snow   Tue Nov 15, 2011 1:13 am

Botchy wheelbarrow. Enjoy please. Feedback appreciated.

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PostSubject: Re: Devin Bliss vs. AJ Snow   Tue Nov 15, 2011 1:35 am

Will watch tomorrow and leave feedback.

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PostSubject: Re: Devin Bliss vs. AJ Snow   Tue Nov 15, 2011 1:56 am

I watched this, I will give detail tomorrow. There will be lots of it, so yeah.
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PostSubject: Re: Devin Bliss vs. AJ Snow   Tue Nov 15, 2011 2:06 am

Appreciate it, guys.
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PostSubject: Re: Devin Bliss vs. AJ Snow   Tue Nov 15, 2011 2:44 am

Looked better in person. Will leave actual feedback whenever you start doing the same.
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PostSubject: Re: Devin Bliss vs. AJ Snow   Tue Nov 15, 2011 1:22 pm

Okay I'm going to sound like an indy asshole right now, but that was the weakest tie up ever! lol If I wasn't your friend you would have lost me at the tie up. that being said, the shine at the beginning was non exisitant. You need to remember, at an indy show like this, the crowd does not care if you can wrestle or not, they don't care if you can chain or anything, they only want to see the heel get thrown around, and the face win.

- Snow, you no selled Devin's punches on the exchange.

- Devin, GOOD sound on the Euro.
-Devin, took a bit too long to set up that kick in the corner, but it sounded evil so i loved it. lol

-Devin you looked really lazy on the follow up kicks. If that was supposed to be the cut off, taunt the crowd a bit, then pick snow up and kick him like you mean it!

- Good little hope spot for snow, just don't make it so obvious you're backing him into the ropes. and devin, when you bend down for you kick, BEND DOWN! lol Good post up euro to cut him back off again.

- idk what that little sholder breaker was, you should have held him up for a bit longer, walked him around a bit, then dropped him.

- Indy kick was alright.

-I DIED when the commentater said something about stars being on your side when snow did the indy kick. lol

-The three northern lights were very nice, can't tell if that was supposed to be the comeback or not.

- this ref suck dick.

- again, don't make it so obvious you're taking your opponent to the corner or ropes. Just shove him, or grab his head and throw it into the buckle.

- FANTASTIC step up knee by Snow!

- Loved that little roll through kick.

- ah, theres the double down. Double kick was good.

- I donno what that move was that snow did to devin, looked like he missed him.

- So snows comeback was non existant. Should have been contuineous bumping of devin.

- Nice lariot by Devin

- HUGE finish! I just wish you would have built it up a bit more, like teased something else then hitting the big move to finish him. Honestly, snow should have hit a big move on devin before the finish to tease him winning.

All in all it was a pretty decent match, but I know both of you can do so much better than that. just remember, when you're on little shows like that, LESS is MORE. But I love yall. good job. <3

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PostSubject: Re: Devin Bliss vs. AJ Snow   Tue Nov 15, 2011 5:50 pm

First thing I noticed and remembered when I watched this was: You guys have 0% charisma or anything. You just hit moves, Mimes are louder during sex.

Who’s face and who’s heel?

Tie up was weak

When he is pushing you back, act like you’re restraining him. You just kind of pushed back like nothing

Tell the ref to tuck his shirt in.

No one cares that you guys can lock in headlocks. You’re in front of kids, they want action. Try to start the next match with no chaining, see what you can come up with

You kicked straight out of his legs from the choke and all the sudden hit the ropes? Why?

The casadora is always done with the right arm, niggas keep doing it with the left, no. Stop!

Snow should have just hit his arm drag out of the casadora

You’re hitting him hard, but you should make some noise your self, don’t let the strikes do the emotion for you.

That wasn’t a good hope spot. He just started hitting you after you destroyed him with like 5 big strikes?

Lazy cover after the T-bone.

Is that big will commentating? Tell him to shut the hell up

You both did indy kicks? Don’t do it again bliss, he just made yours look like shit. Since you know, he no sold it and hten knocked you down with one.

Devin, you took the northern lights so bad. Wrap your arm around him like you’re going to give him a ddt.

Snow just kind of picked you up Devin. Don’t just pick him like out of nowhere.

You take that little combo from snow then you guys get up exchanging forearms? Usually that exchange is always doen that late in the match after like a double down
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He gave you an ultra go to sleep and picks you back up? WHY!?

Then he hits you with two forearms and you hit a lariat?

The Omega driver was cool.

Other than that, this was not good. Learn to make your wrestling make sense. If you were at a real indy show, they would have probably laughed at this match. Nothing made sense, you had no idea who the heel was, who the face was. Was there heat during the match? Seemed lke nothing was there.

I couldn't even give you feedback on basic things, because nothing was basic. This was just moves.

If I came off as a dick, I don't really care. I am just being honest, I won't come off telling you this ruled. Well, mainly becuase it's an indy level thing. BYW, I could give two shits about how this was structured, but this wasn't so, yeah.

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PostSubject: Re: Devin Bliss vs. AJ Snow   Tue Nov 15, 2011 5:58 pm

tonydeppen wrote:
Mimes are louder during sex.


I lost it.

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PostSubject: Re: Devin Bliss vs. AJ Snow   Wed Nov 16, 2011 2:04 am

Appreciate it, Tony and Nick.
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PostSubject: Re: Devin Bliss vs. AJ Snow   Thu Nov 17, 2011 9:17 pm

microphone commentary sucks

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