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PostSubject: Watch how bad I am at wrestling and criticize everything I do wrong...   Tue May 03, 2011 1:04 am

http://www.megavideo.com/?d=YDR2TK20
^Should be an instant view, shouldn't have to download.

Time Frame:

4:10-8:29 - Chris Kash vs. "The Spartan" Blane Barton vs. Taylor "The Train" Bley for the DWA Championship
The Good Life by Three Days Grace
3 of the best yarders in ALL of Iowa, in the main event. We had fun in this match. Critics: Tell me what was good and bad.

"The Show Goes On" by Lupe Fiasco
0:12-1:17 - Ryan Burge vs. Max Davis
Super Troll vs. one of our rookies

1:18-1:52 - DWA Champion Taylor Bley vs. Thomas Wells
The Champ (not to mention, #10 in this months P25) takes on ANOTHER DWA rookie, in a quick match with a brutal finish.

1:53-3:08 - Chris Kash vs. Ryan Burge
The Only Guy in DWA that is universally respected takes on Paul Kunkle's arch-rival. For the 19th time. That's not an exaggeration either.

3:09-4:09 - Blane Barton vs. Max Davis
The Northeast's favorite piņata squares off with our green-as-grass rook. Plenty of memorable spots, tbh. Plus, as you can tell at the end, it was my birthday. Pointless fact.





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PostSubject: Re: Watch how bad I am at wrestling and criticize everything I do wrong...   Tue May 03, 2011 1:05 am

Wrong thread, oops. Do work on us now.
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PostSubject: Re: Watch how bad I am at wrestling and criticize everything I do wrong...   Tue May 03, 2011 1:07 am

you guys are so bad!



Smile



nahhhhhh. i havent even watched yet. i will when i wake up tomorrow.

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PostSubject: Re: Watch how bad I am at wrestling and criticize everything I do wrong...   Tue May 03, 2011 2:17 am

I'll take your word for it, Donald. Good night.
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PostSubject: Re: Watch how bad I am at wrestling and criticize everything I do wrong...   Tue May 03, 2011 2:18 am

Isn't this the reunion show?
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PostSubject: Re: Watch how bad I am at wrestling and criticize everything I do wrong...   Tue May 03, 2011 2:19 am

I also plan on checking this out at some point tommorow to give some feedback so expect that.
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PostSubject: Re: Watch how bad I am at wrestling and criticize everything I do wrong...   Tue May 03, 2011 6:32 pm

Burge/Davis:
-Second lockup was kinda akward, it looked like they were locking up because thats what youre supposed to do, not because they wanted to hurt the other person. Gotta make it look legit.
-No idea what that headlock throw was by Davis.
-Davis' offense looks very sloppy and like he isn't used to wrestling yet, i understand that he's new, just something to work on
-Burge's chop was good, forearm wasn't fluid but hit well, and the headbutt didn't even connect it looked like.
-capture backdrop was so good
-clotheslines by Davis looked really solid, kid throws good lines
-Burge's sell on the skull crushing finale was garbage, gotta bump that so it looks like it could possibly hurt
-Davis looks like he has potential, still very tentative and nervous though it seems

Train vs. Wells
-Wells is bumping slowly
-Train seems to be doing a better job at leading and taking control than Burge did
-The front roll into kick woulda been death if Train had come in full speed and not softened up for the kid. Woulda been sick.
-Didn't really get to see much from wells, so far Davis looked to be the better rookie, train is good and did fine for what he had to work with

Kash vs. Burge
-Chaining from Kash was clean
-I feel like Burge just moves so much slower, the first armdrag was very slow
-capture backdrop was awesome again, takes so long to get ready though
-spin around into lungblower dealio was a cool idea, wasn't executed perfectly but i appreciated it
-Kash's strikes are good
-bad clothesline with no duck, good backstabber sell though
-backfist ruled, lariat ruled too
-basic but good finish

Barton vs. Davis
-Sick beginning sequence, kicks were awesome
-loved the punch from davis
-good german
-legdrop looked sick but didn't really connect well
-Skull crushing finale into the table was so good, great idea, your sell really made it work
-he landed weird on the finish but good regardless
-really enjoyed this match

Kash vs. Train vs. Barton
-set up for this was good
-you guys locked up and you are much bigger than him blane, gotta show the power with the lockup
-posture needs to be better on the chaining, it is tough working with someone smaller though so i understand, but at the same time that could also mean chaining and technical wrestling wasnt the way to attack a 1 on 1 with you and kash
-backdrop was fine, your clothesline had some good oomph behind it
-double team with the suplex made sense
-better lockup with train and kash
-liked the legdrops, both executed well
-turned a bit on the german, if you just went straight back that woulda been sick
-chris' double euros to the back? was a cool idea but tough to execute if thats what it was haha
-its weird that barton was just in 2 sharpshooters but can still jump up for a leapfrog at full power, sell those legs dude
-you took the backstabber like a boss blane
-train, everyone in the world does a scoop slam, make yours stand out, there was nothing behind that
-powerbomb onto train was a good 3 way spot
-the 3 big power moves here were spot on, done very well
-trains roll flip thing was not good
-double crossface looked brutal
-already saw the same missed kick sequence in the other match, was hoping to see it hit
-counter sequence between blane and chris was really smooth, good job with that, made me feel like the finish was coming very soon
-beatdown wasn't great, team punt move was alright, wish it hadn't ended like that

I was much more critical on the main than anything else because you 3 know how to wrestle. HONESTLY, I want to wrestle Iowa so bad, im not sure if the rest of the forum thinks like I do but I hope the opportunity comes along at some point, i've wanted it to happen for awhile now. I hope this feedback helps.
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PostSubject: Re: Watch how bad I am at wrestling and criticize everything I do wrong...   Tue May 03, 2011 8:30 pm

Zeke, after watching this I feel like you vs Blane would be boss.

I watched this as well. I'm not gonna get detailed but here's a bit of feedy. I thought the first half of this was meh. A lot of stuff seemed super tenative, like guys didn't wanna bump on the ground or go full out. I thought it started to turn around in Chris's match and I was really enjoying it during your match Blane. You took everything like a champ and not a single fuck was given by you. You made the new guy look great and I thought you really shined in this video. You had more energy and emotion behind your stuff than anybody else. You, Train, and Chris had some great chemistry in the main and I enjoyed it.
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PostSubject: Re: Watch how bad I am at wrestling and criticize everything I do wrong...   Tue May 03, 2011 9:51 pm

I watched this already

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PostSubject: Re: Watch how bad I am at wrestling and criticize everything I do wrong...   Tue May 03, 2011 9:57 pm

I'm gonna watch it now.
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PostSubject: Re: Watch how bad I am at wrestling and criticize everything I do wrong...   Thu May 05, 2011 12:21 am

I'm glad what stood out to Devin the most was a football tackle during one of the matches. Go figure...
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PostSubject: Re: Watch how bad I am at wrestling and criticize everything I do wrong...   Thu May 05, 2011 1:03 am

Blane wrote:
I'm glad what stood out to Devin the most was a football tackle during one of the matches. Go figure...


Can you blame me?
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PostSubject: Re: Watch how bad I am at wrestling and criticize everything I do wrong...   Thu May 05, 2011 1:53 am

Devin Sez Hai! wrote:
Blane wrote:
I'm glad what stood out to Devin the most was a football tackle during one of the matches. Go figure...


Can you blame me?


It is what you do. So no, not at all.
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PostSubject: Re: Watch how bad I am at wrestling and criticize everything I do wrong...   Thu May 05, 2011 1:57 am

One love Blane, one love.
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PostSubject: Re: Watch how bad I am at wrestling and criticize everything I do wrong...   Sat May 07, 2011 6:41 pm

blane, this is the first time i saw you wrestle...and i like it.

you and kash definitely shined out in this video. loved your selling, and the main event was pretty tight

your other guys just seem lethargic when it comes to their offense, along with selling.
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PostSubject: Re: Watch how bad I am at wrestling and criticize everything I do wrong...   Sat May 07, 2011 7:03 pm

it was enjoyable, but it can be better if you guys got a bigger base
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PostSubject: Re: Watch how bad I am at wrestling and criticize everything I do wrong...   Sun May 08, 2011 10:05 pm

JohnDiggory wrote:
it was enjoyable, but it can be better if you guys got a bigger base


Absolutely. In the past, we've had an actual, decent-sized full ring. We've had bases, and we've done trampoline. These little mats are the worst, but they are all we have at the moment. And we wanna wrestle now, so we say fuck it, and do it.
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