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PostSubject: (First Ring Match) MXW - Adrian Blaqueheart vs. Tricky Stycks   Sat Mar 05, 2011 11:45 pm

It was our first time in a ring and our debut with a new promotion. Feedback is appreciated.

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PostSubject: Re: (First Ring Match) MXW - Adrian Blaqueheart vs. Tricky Stycks   Sun Mar 06, 2011 12:04 am

You OOZE charisma.
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PostSubject: Re: (First Ring Match) MXW - Adrian Blaqueheart vs. Tricky Stycks   Sun Mar 06, 2011 12:53 am

Is that ring a 16 foot or 18 foot?

I am writing this as I go along in the video so bare with me.

From what I can see, work on running against the ropes. Looks like you are hesitating too much, don't be afraid to put your weight into them.

Like the submission at 3:43, that was interesting.

Some of the bumps looked kind of weak but if it's your first ring match it's understandable, I had the same problem at first. You will get used to it.


Work on execution, some of your kicks and strikes didn't have enough force.

I like your guys submissions, very creative stuff, keep that up.

Overall it was good and I enjoyed watching it. You guys have a good foundation for basics, just have to get used to working in the ring.
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PostSubject: Re: (First Ring Match) MXW - Adrian Blaqueheart vs. Tricky Stycks   Sun Mar 06, 2011 4:05 am

Overall, decent for your first ring match.

Work on running the ropes and execution. Some of it was sloppy.

Some of the bumps were okay, but like CJ said, you will get used to it once you work on them.

Once you guys work on everything, you will be beasts. And will be fucking bitches on Tuesday nights in no time.
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PostSubject: Re: (First Ring Match) MXW - Adrian Blaqueheart vs. Tricky Stycks   Sun Mar 06, 2011 10:20 am

Okay, I actually watched this. I honestly cannot critique all of it, because there is a LOT to work on.

-If you can't run the ropes, don't hit them. If you can't do it properly, then it looks like shit.
-The match itself made 0 sense, and a good amount of the time, you both looked lost
-You were doing fancy submissions, which to me does nothing, because the basics come first.
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PostSubject: Re: (First Ring Match) MXW - Adrian Blaqueheart vs. Tricky Stycks   Sun Mar 06, 2011 8:06 pm

good feedback guys Smile

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PostSubject: Re: (First Ring Match) MXW - Adrian Blaqueheart vs. Tricky Stycks   Mon Mar 07, 2011 9:13 pm

Yeah, thanks for the comments, guys.

Also, it's a 16 foot ring.
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PostSubject: Re: (First Ring Match) MXW - Adrian Blaqueheart vs. Tricky Stycks   Mon Mar 07, 2011 9:24 pm

That's good, a lot of room to work.
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PostSubject: Re: (First Ring Match) MXW - Adrian Blaqueheart vs. Tricky Stycks   Mon Mar 07, 2011 10:34 pm

Yeah, it's sweet. Still takes some getting used to, but it was exciting to finally use a ring after so many years.
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PostSubject: Re: (First Ring Match) MXW - Adrian Blaqueheart vs. Tricky Stycks   Mon Mar 07, 2011 10:38 pm

Im watching this match thinking "Wow he is trying to work a Danielson style" Nothing wrong with that. But work out basic stuff before doing so. You'll get it

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PostSubject: Re: (First Ring Match) MXW - Adrian Blaqueheart vs. Tricky Stycks   Mon Mar 07, 2011 10:40 pm

Haha, I know the feeling. We got ours in June of 2008. We used to wrestle on ground, so it was an adjustment for sure, but shortly after that we started taking it seriously. I'm interested in seeing where you guys go.
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PostSubject: Re: (First Ring Match) MXW - Adrian Blaqueheart vs. Tricky Stycks   Tue Mar 08, 2011 1:06 am

Mike Damage wrote:
Im watching this match thinking "Wow he is trying to work a Danielson style" Nothing wrong with that. But work out basic stuff before doing so. You'll get it


Yeah, Danielson with a couple spots I took from McGuinness, too. Thanks for the feedback.
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PostSubject: Re: (First Ring Match) MXW - Adrian Blaqueheart vs. Tricky Stycks   Tue Mar 08, 2011 1:07 am

C.J. haVoc wrote:
Haha, I know the feeling. We got ours in June of 2008. We used to wrestle on ground, so it was an adjustment for sure, but shortly after that we started taking it seriously. I'm interested in seeing where you guys go.


Thanks, glad to hear it.
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PostSubject: Re: (First Ring Match) MXW - Adrian Blaqueheart vs. Tricky Stycks   Thu Apr 21, 2011 12:37 am

good match i enjoyed it
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PostSubject: Re: (First Ring Match) MXW - Adrian Blaqueheart vs. Tricky Stycks   Thu Apr 21, 2011 1:04 am

Liked the keylock opening

Positioning is important, back him into the corner then start the biel toss. You are in a big enough ring.

Didn't like the knees to his back and when you put your foot on his shoulder mainly because he didn't sell.

Running the ropes, learn.

Way to long to whip him off, if you need to call a spot hit him, don't hold his hand. Also didn't like how you just moved him around.

3:03 did he miss bump that move? What was it supposed to be.

Nice running kick

Would have liked it if you kicked his chest to knock him down into the pin.

Sell more you stood with his gut punches and acted like nothing happened.

Good pin 3:55 but should have sold submission more

Good backbreaker, crossface combo

Set up to enziguri and ddt spots vary similar. Didn't like similar set ups in a row.

Tricky's running knee to you in the corner looked weak

Nice bulldog by Tricky

Nice submission after the armbar

Slooooooooow powerbomb. Looked ineffective

Shitty leg drop

Better powerbomb, but he ass bumped.

left your friend behind to get his ass beat tsk tsk

Overall not bad. Focus on selling more and being more animated. Learn to run the ropes. I'm not gonna focus on logic with this match, it was just off.

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PostSubject: Re: (First Ring Match) MXW - Adrian Blaqueheart vs. Tricky Stycks   Thu Apr 21, 2011 12:02 pm

what are you heel or face? cause i cant tell...

ok so the second guy dont play to the "crowd" he just kinda does some things

guessing your both faces

lock up was iffy

chaining is repetitive

he needs to post on the hip toss and you need to give him the leg to do so

make your shit look impact full your knees to the back were terrible

DONT HIT THE ROPES IF YOU CANT!!!

Sell what you guys are doing you look like your just going through the steps

backslide was way to slow btw

talking to much cover it up better

was supposed to land on his ass on that move

backbreaker to cross face was cool idea but looked sloppy

spot for enziguri seemed botched/sloppy was preformed to slow

tiltwhirl ddt was to slow

hit the turnbuckle it dont hurt

knees in corner didnt connect

wheres the psychology in this match

you bump so awkward... you dont make them have any sort of impact

the finish was so sloppy and you didnt work his back through the match your crossfacce worked the neck not the back

Overall work on your basic and learn how to hit the ropes and turnbuckle that bugs the hell out of me when people try and cant do that running the ropes is easy!
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