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PostSubject: EWA Elite: Ryan Rage vs. Murph vs. PJ Matthews   Mon Oct 18, 2010 9:58 pm


I'm trying to get back into the swing of things with wrestling, so any feedback of course is appreciated.
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PostSubject: Re: EWA Elite: Ryan Rage vs. Murph vs. PJ Matthews   Tue Oct 19, 2010 1:09 am

oh yeah!!!! loved this match

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PostSubject: Re: EWA Elite: Ryan Rage vs. Murph vs. PJ Matthews   Tue Oct 19, 2010 1:29 am

Thanks Cam. I'd love to hear some feedback on this match as well.
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PostSubject: Re: EWA Elite: Ryan Rage vs. Murph vs. PJ Matthews   Tue Oct 19, 2010 5:13 am

Decent opening, but these highly planned synchronize dependent situations rarely work out cleanly, and this was no exception. I DO like the establishment of the characters in it though.
DUG the leg sweep trip, was awesome. Senton by the guy in black was poor though.
Don't be so obvious on the hammerlock bridges, was too clear how you were helping each other up and down.
Your triple team spots are sound concepts, not as clean as they could be though thus far.
Also be more aggressive when transitioning from pins and into moves/spots, theres alot of awkward approaching and some whispers with weak a few forearms. Try talking while pressing them back into the corner or the ropes, much less obvious and you maintain realism.
Sick face stomp.
Everyone remember to cradle the back of the head when scoop slamming, looks alot cleaner.
Murdering murph off the top rope was fucking awesome.
Running SAT bomb was sick too.
Great contact on the superkick, hit perfectly and wasn't unnecessarily stiff.
Fusions rarely work out well when you don't guide their head with your free arm, try that next time.
Decent "controversial" finish, I don't understand why Mathews wouldn't jsut break up teh sub but it wasn't taht big ofa deal.

Awesome math dudes, hope this helps.
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PostSubject: Re: EWA Elite: Ryan Rage vs. Murph vs. PJ Matthews   Tue Oct 19, 2010 9:33 am

Chalis wrote:
Decent opening, but these highly planned synchronize dependent situations rarely work out cleanly, and this was no exception. I DO like the establishment of the characters in it though.
DUG the leg sweep trip, was awesome. Senton by the guy in black was poor though.
Don't be so obvious on the hammerlock bridges, was too clear how you were helping each other up and down.
Your triple team spots are sound concepts, not as clean as they could be though thus far.
Also be more aggressive when transitioning from pins and into moves/spots, theres alot of awkward approaching and some whispers with weak a few forearms. Try talking while pressing them back into the corner or the ropes, much less obvious and you maintain realism.
Sick face stomp.
Everyone remember to cradle the back of the head when scoop slamming, looks alot cleaner.
Murdering murph off the top rope was fucking awesome.
Running SAT bomb was sick too.
Great contact on the superkick, hit perfectly and wasn't unnecessarily stiff.
Fusions rarely work out well when you don't guide their head with your free arm, try that next time.
Decent "controversial" finish, I don't understand why Mathews wouldn't jsut break up teh sub but it wasn't taht big ofa deal.

Awesome math dudes, hope this helps.


your the man, thanks bro
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PostSubject: Re: EWA Elite: Ryan Rage vs. Murph vs. PJ Matthews   Tue Oct 19, 2010 9:34 am

P.S MV of this and a little JWA History before it coming soon.
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PostSubject: Re: EWA Elite: Ryan Rage vs. Murph vs. PJ Matthews   Tue Oct 19, 2010 10:21 am

Gracias Chalis. Me not being able to break up the submission was supposed to be me selling the two Hands of Destiney I took, but I know what you're sayin. This is why I just flicked him off, and it was cool getting a crossface in haha.

But all that was noted and appreciated.

Do it up Rage. You faggot.
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PostSubject: Re: EWA Elite: Ryan Rage vs. Murph vs. PJ Matthews   Tue Oct 19, 2010 10:40 am

good shit guys and again thanks for coming down. ewa wants you back.
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PostSubject: Re: EWA Elite: Ryan Rage vs. Murph vs. PJ Matthews   Tue Oct 19, 2010 11:54 am

KingTek wrote:
good shit guys and again thanks for coming down. ewa wants you back.


I just got a car, so expect to see me a lot next season
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PostSubject: Re: EWA Elite: Ryan Rage vs. Murph vs. PJ Matthews   Tue Oct 19, 2010 12:22 pm

Thanks for the feedback Chalis. Both times I did forearms I actually wasn't talking, I was just building to the spots that followed. And I know how to do a fusion. It's been my finisher for three plus years now. PJ has taken it so many times that he knows to tuck his head, so I normally don't have to guide it when I do it with him. And watching it over again, it looks like I did guide his head both times anyway. But thanks again for all the feedback. Will keep everything in mind. Appreciate it.

And thanks Tek. I'll definitely be sure to make it down next season.
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PostSubject: Re: EWA Elite: Ryan Rage vs. Murph vs. PJ Matthews   Tue Oct 19, 2010 6:56 pm

I agree with Tek. Hope to see all three of you back in EWA next season.
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PostSubject: Re: EWA Elite: Ryan Rage vs. Murph vs. PJ Matthews   Tue Oct 19, 2010 7:47 pm

I just watched it again, and you do it a different way to how I visualized. Whatever, it just looked over rotated to me. And the crawl into the crossface made more sense this time round too.
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PostSubject: Re: EWA Elite: Ryan Rage vs. Murph vs. PJ Matthews   Wed Oct 20, 2010 8:38 am

Joe Hall wrote:
I agree with Tek. Hope to see all three of you back in EWA next season.

absolutely.
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PostSubject: Re: EWA Elite: Ryan Rage vs. Murph vs. PJ Matthews   Tue Oct 26, 2010 4:10 pm

This match is EPIC!!
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