GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010

Subject: Re: GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010 Thu Apr 22, 2010 4:08 pm

Cus I wanna see if you can do any better.

Subject: Re: GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010 Thu Apr 22, 2010 9:57 pm

I cant let you do that Star Fox

Subject: Re: GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010 Thu Apr 22, 2010 10:35 pm

Dylan-jer wrote:

Get that kid out of there. If you're going to have an announcer at least make sure he has an announcer voice. Having some smiling little tike out there kills everything. I seriously thought he was going to say "Hi, my name is Dynamite and I'm a PC."

Retarded entrance on the first guy's part. One, his name is Danger. Two, he's wearing jean short with kickpads, black and white gloves, and a baggy black t-shirt. GTFO. Three, he looks like an abused inbred hick up close. Four, his music stops when he touches the grass. Jesus Christo.

Second guy was slightly better. Still another stupid one word name, still needs gear, and he's supposed to be a face but he just strolls out not getting anybody into it... but at least he doesn't look like Cletus's nefyah o'er n Mayimfiss.

Best shot ever.

Worst beginning ever. Staredown, even though you just had your back turned? You were relaxed, and you two have no history as far as the viewer is concerned, but all of the sudden you suddenly hated each other and stared each other down. Which led into a weak slap by Hillbilly Bob, and an even worse "lockup." Like that was seriously the worst attempt at a lockup I have ever seen. The Tennessee trash had no idea what was going on, and the other guy grabbed the neck with the wrong arm and just kind of wiggled until he get was "punched."

On the fireman's carry don't drop to both knees. Only have the knee on the side they bump on down, so they have a base to post off of. Also, you did it on the wrong side.

Hammerlock into an armwring is stupid. Technically a hammerlock is a stronger lock than an armwringer. Getting them in a hammerlock then unbending the arm into a wristlock makes no sense. Also, you want to work around them the other way most of the time, so they have a general idea of what to expect.

Solefood to the gut? If that was on purpose that's alright, I guess. Not as cool as a regular solefood, but acceptable.

Shoulder tackle/clothesline thing was bad. I think that was a clothesline. Get your arm out, but don't just run with it straight out. Swing it. Take his fucking head off, but not literally. Hold your arm out, bent at a 45 degree angle, and hit them flat across the chest with your bicep and forearm about 2 centimeters below the clavicle. Your hand should go over their shoulder. They bump, and you follow through with the swing.

Weak stomps. Raise your foot more. Bring it up and down, not across. And stomp with your heel, not your toes.

Then you just get up and walk around for a second while waiting for him, and pull him up by the elbow. Lame.

Also, the face shouldn't put the heat on the heel. Just sayin'.

Worst Irish whip. I didn't believe that at all. Put some effort into it.

For the submission, don't drag him down and then get into the body scissors. Jump into the body scissors, and then he goes down because he can't hold your weight. Or he doesn't, which is cooler most of the time. Anyway, I thought you were going to do a wrong-sided double arm DDT.

He has it on for 4 seconds and you pass out!? Seriously?? Go home. Watch some John Cena.

Lame and sloppy running STO.

Now a heel heat.

You work the knee then go straight for the wrong elbow. That makes sense.

Hey, I actually liked that submission chain. I might have to steal that.

To be continued...

the name is Nature not Danger if u need a hearing aid ill buy you one

Subject: Re: GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010 Thu Apr 22, 2010 10:37 pm

Nature, he's leaving you good feedback, don't get a bug up your butt.

Subject: Re: GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010 Thu Apr 22, 2010 10:44 pm

We appriciate the feedback. I'm not sure what was with the still of the bald guy, lmao. And I really want to know what "Cletus's nefyah o'er n Mayimfiss" is. Lol.

Subject: Re: GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010 Fri Apr 23, 2010 12:07 am

Conker wrote:

Cus I wanna see if you can do any better.

Burge can do better than this.

And has. That's the sad part.

Nature wrote:

the name is Nature not Danger if u need a hearing aid ill buy you one

Cool it, Confederate Kid.

Subject: Re: GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010 Fri Apr 23, 2010 12:11 am

instinct1104 wrote:

We appriciate the feedback. I'm not sure what was with the still of the bald guy, lmao. And I really want to know what "Cletus's nefyah o'er n Mayimfiss" is. Lol.

No problem. I'm really not trying to be a dick, just giving a different perspective.

Subject: Re: GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010 Fri Apr 23, 2010 12:24 am

Lol Dylan's going to be wrestling pro (not all this UBW CCW bullshit, actual pro) and could wrestle fucking crop circles around your fat ass

Subject: Re: GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010 Fri Apr 23, 2010 9:19 am

nice one

Subject: Re: GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010 Fri Apr 23, 2010 2:59 pm

Dylan Jer wrote:

Conker wrote:

Cus I wanna see if you can do any better.

Burge can do better than this.

And has. That's the sad part.

Nature wrote:

the name is Nature not Danger if u need a hearing aid ill buy you one

Cool it, Confederate Kid.

iight man i am not a confederate i am more of a yankee i don't like ppl who r racist

Subject: Re: GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010 Fri Apr 23, 2010 10:39 pm

i love how your implying that "confederate" southern people are automatically racist

i hope rigor mortis gives you a john walters

Subject: Re: GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010 Sat Apr 24, 2010 5:56 pm

hope ur daddy gives u an Abe LIncoln

Subject: Re: GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010 Sat Apr 24, 2010 5:57 pm

an i am not talking bout money

Subject: Re: GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010 Sat Apr 24, 2010 9:51 pm

Subject: Re: GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010 Sun Apr 25, 2010 12:48 am

He means the actual Abe Lincoln. It's a Confederate insult.

Subject: Re: GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010 Sun Apr 25, 2010 3:25 pm

no its not dumbass its a sexual joke if u had any idea

Subject: Re: GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010 Sun Apr 25, 2010 3:28 pm

Nature wrote:

no its not dumbass its a sexual joke if u had any idea

please. cease with the unintelligence.

Subject: Re: GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010 Mon Apr 26, 2010 8:46 pm

Perfection wrote:

Nature wrote:

no its not dumbass its a sexual joke if u had any idea

please. cease with the unintelligence.

Subject: Re: GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010 Thu Apr 29, 2010 9:37 pm

This topic is more interesting than the match itself.

Subject: Re: GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010 Fri May 28, 2010 9:37 am

That Nature kid should shave his stache or grow it bigger. he's got the ginger sanchez look going on.

Shaky camera. Weird introductions (a little balnd, too)

Try to get gear and a base or something. Ground is decent, but it does look bad.

What's with the music after standing around akwardly?

Crappy collar and elbow

When you do the Regal stretch, Nature, you should hold his wrists, not hold him like you're doing a dragon suplex

Decent chaining, somewhat sloppy but acceptable

Not gonna even comment on the rest. Man, I hope i get scored better than this when i send my match in.

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tonyficaccio wrote:

not badass is ao and bushleauge.

tficaccvsbigpinkpkmverios wrote:

i thought clayton cross was from new hampshire with big pink but this works good for me

GBYWN Spring Challenge 2010

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