Great! thanks for doing the GBYWN Spring Challenge!

credit to the wrestlers for having an appropriate wrestling attire... but there is no need to taunt to a imaginary crowd

AND who are the wrestlers? i don't hear a ring announcer or see a name bar, WAY TO INTRODUCE your WRESTLERS!

not to be on the negative end, but the very first attack barley connected.. and so did the drop kick, both moves looked very weak, and thats not the way to start out a match

This is what I call a video game match, it was one random thing after another. the match needs to tell a story, not only do i not know the names of the wrestlers, but I dont know who's the face and who is the heel! i should know during the beginning of the match.

its seems like there was alot of confusion in this match, try on planning spots before the match

there were a few good spots and a few misses, good job overall and i hope to see improvement soon!

Thx for the constructive

criticism

Ok so time to review this match here.

First off, the wrestlers have gone nameless without a namebar or commentary reference like Cam says. It is best recommended that you present the identities so we know who is who. A handshake I guess accomplishes a face vs. face match. Face vs. heel, however, is the better way to go for more effectiveness and storytelling. Starting with a clothesline is a definite no unless for instance the opposite person ducks and hits a few strikes or puts on headlock or such. Matches usually begin with a tie up, test of strength (best between bigger guys), or a strike and by the way, that clothesline was pretty weak too. The dropkick after was ok. Superkick was just thin air and big moves like that aren't suppose to be seen early and instead a display of some technical ability. Remember that chain wrestling and submission moves keeps the glue together in a match. Also irish whip using your left arm and whipping your opponent's left arm.

A lot of miscommunication, if there was any at all, was what I seen throughout the bout. Too much quick random counters, weakly done moves, and lack of selling, pace, psychology and planning. Just remember each opponent in a match has to have their time to shine and time to play out the story of the match. A refreshment to your guys' moveset and riddance of the use of WWE moves and the repeated use of any move would surely help. For what I did enjoy, well Anything Goes matches are cool to watch, I do appreciate effort so just try and work on everything I advised about.

fuck all that

tramp wrestling shouldnt even be allowed

I view tramp wrestling as a training stage before you go to using mat or ring or ground. ETTW still uses it and features some of the best tramp wrestling ever.

you guys should get some money and go to wrestling school but you gotta check if they will let you because of your age yours moves were sloppy the chokeslam was not right

so they need to go get trained why exactly

I agree, plenty of yarders have become decent to even great without getting professional training. That doesn't mean it's not a good idea, but you can still learn a lot just by studying, visualizing, getting advice, and practicing.

and another thing based off blues picture u can see they have gon over that corckscrew attack and if he is doing it out of the ring on to somebody they have to catch his head so he does not get a head injury

we followed some of the advice that we got from everyone on the site and we want to know, have we improved?